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| "When You Least Expect" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2002 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job!! Can't wait to you write another chapter. Bye | Reviewed By: Susan On: March 10, 2002 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chap. The meeting with the mystic went well considering that she's still live. Glad to know poor Bulma has a friend now. Write more soon. | Reviewed By: Susan On: March 06, 2002 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chap. Any day that Zarbon gets slapped around is a lovely day (^_^). So the mystic was expecting artichoke head? Seems like she's one step ahead of the game. I wonder what his reaction will be when she informs him who Bulma really is. Btw, when Zarbon described the crest, did you mean lion (as in big cat) or loin (as in something to cover male goodies). Just curious. Good luck at the tournament. Later. | Reviewed By: me On: March 06, 2002 15:33 CST
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PLEASE CONTINUE!!! | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: March 06, 2002 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Eh, good chapter! Jadedbeast (lol) I liked Zarbon's little punishment, but Cell is just sick! Keeping a head in a jar and talking to it? And I thought Vegeta was insane.
So, what's next? Talk with the witch? Talk with Bulma? Cell gets his butt kicked by Vegeta (which I always like to see, I didn't call my site Bow to the Prince for nothing after all)? Vegeta goes Super? What about Frieza? He still seems minor. Supposed to be, eh? Seems to me he wouldn't be trusting Cell that much. Maybe a little Cell planning Frieza's demise, Frieza planning Cell's demise going on? lol, they'd defeat themselves. that would be funny!
Oh, and roflmbo. You keep describing the crest of Vegeta-sei as a V with a loin in it! Do you mean lion? Maned big cat of Africa? Or are you serious about a loin? What's a loin look like anyways? lol
See ya next chapter! | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: March 04, 2002 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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:P See, I did read this. I just forgot to
review... lol Sorry.
Oh, I always like meetings. So, he already likes
her...but what aboout ChiChi and Goku? Will their
love ever be requited? (gag) Getting way too
mushy!
Hercule.... kill him, or maim him. Same with
Zarbon only minus the maim part! lol
Where's Cell? and Frieza? Although he seems minor
in this. I like the mother. She's very
'Bulma-ish'. HAH! New word!
Now, you update fast yes. (sigh) I already have
the ending planned for my story... (sigh) | Reviewed By: Susan On: March 02, 2002 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, Veggie's just a ray of f*cking sunshine, isn't he? Bulma should've slapped him when he referred to her as his barganing chip. Anyway, I wonder what the mystic will tell him and if he'll even bother to listen. Great chap, write more soon. Peace | Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2002 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chi-Chi and Hercule?!? @_@
Good job! | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2002 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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lol, you have no idea what I was thinking! It was very far from that! I was thinking, 'Boy that's funny. Vegeta's probably going to poop his pants when he realizes that he can't even return her.
Poor Zarbon. Oh, I bet the look on your face is priceless right about now, huh? Me, impatient? Well, I do style myself after Vegeta. Although, with those four days he waited to Krillin and Gohan to make their move on Namek, he's a pretty patient Saiyan.
Oh, you want to know about DOY? (lol, doy! it's late!) Well, I just got half of the fourth chapter done and it's 16 pages. That's half the reason. The other. One word for you: NAMEK! You try crushing it all in one chapter. (sigh) But I must do it this way. By the fifth chapter certain things have to have happened.
So, to please you, I've posted the first half. 16 pages. Go read it. You will hate the end. :) I'm so sadistic! Well, go read it already. I'm very proud of it. Best yet, I think. I only reread it twenty times! lol | Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2002 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN IT! You didn't finish it! ;.; Good stuff! ^-^ | Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 04, 2002 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad you've updated finally! yay!
i wonder who is attacking the sayian ship? if it's not kakkarot and raditz, who could it be? argh, so many questions!
a week! a week! and then it's over! (no, then exams begin...) eep!
update soon! (and ignore my babbling...) | Reviewed By: Susan On: February 24, 2002 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it! I knew that scumbucket Zarbon was up to no good. Nappa comes to the rescue only to throw Bulma from the frying pan and into the fire. Now that Veggie knows that Bulma is not Marron, will he return her to her planet? Write more soon, can't wait to see what he does. Peace | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2002 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Course I understand. Writing Vegeta is great but you need to see and hear him to keep him IC. lol
Why are these chapters so maddeningly slow? ARGH! Fifth chapter and no B/V interaction yet? Yes, I will go insane indeed if it's not in the next chapter! Give me a smidgen, a speck, anything
B/V-ish (new word!) Ewww, kill Zarbon. He's not even being subtle. Hopefully she meets up with Vegeta and not Nappa. Nappa/Bulma run-ins hardly ever turn out well. He always tries to rape her or something.
Se, Zarbon in for the kill or rape and kill? :) Either way, make his death nicely appetizing for my gory appetites. Ew, I used that word twice. Time to sleep. (sigh) Almost done with the next chapters to my stories....And got an idea for two more. One a one-shot and the other yet another A/U epic.... This should be fun. | Reviewed By: Susan On: February 22, 2002 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi JB ^_^. Good chap. I gotta tell ya though, the fact that he's with Bulma scares me. He's such a fake and thinks he's all that. Now that Veggie and his crew are in the forest, where Bulma and shithead are headed, are sparks gonna fly or heads gonna roll? Can't wait for ur next update. Till then I'll just fantasize about giving Zarbon a mohawk ;D | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: February 19, 2002 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Oh, today or tomorrow? Cool! Well, I like this chapter. But, Zarbon--oh! Hay, thanks for the idea! Yeah, I know you don't know what I'm talking about. If you read Ch 3 of DOY you will.... It'll be oh so good! Thanks, I'll give you the credit for the idea, though it's so obvious I shouldn't need the help..(mad at self)
Vegeta/Bulma scene coming up? Or Vegeta/Zarbon scene? Or is it Zarbon/Bulma Zarbon/Vegeta Vegeta/Bulma? lol Whichever, long as everyone's happy. IE B/V K/CC Z=dead lol Ok, nough chatter, I need to go--um read more and go to bed I gues (stupid Kakarott in Otherworld reruns, I wanna see Vegeta in a halo!!!!) | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
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