| "When You Least Expect" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: February 22, 2002 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi JB ^_^. Good chap. I gotta tell ya though, the fact that he's with Bulma scares me. He's such a fake and thinks he's all that. Now that Veggie and his crew are in the forest, where Bulma and shithead are headed, are sparks gonna fly or heads gonna roll? Can't wait for ur next update. Till then I'll just fantasize about giving Zarbon a mohawk ;D |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: February 19, 2002 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Oh, today or tomorrow? Cool! Well, I like this chapter. But, Zarbon--oh! Hay, thanks for the idea! Yeah, I know you don't know what I'm talking about. If you read Ch 3 of DOY you will.... It'll be oh so good! Thanks, I'll give you the credit for the idea, though it's so obvious I shouldn't need the help..(mad at self)
Vegeta/Bulma scene coming up? Or Vegeta/Zarbon scene? Or is it Zarbon/Bulma Zarbon/Vegeta Vegeta/Bulma? lol Whichever, long as everyone's happy. IE B/V K/CC Z=dead lol Ok, nough chatter, I need to go--um read more and go to bed I gues (stupid Kakarott in Otherworld reruns, I wanna see Vegeta in a halo!!!!) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 18, 2002 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh joy, Zarbon rears his ugly head. I don't know why but I've always disliked that tree-hugging freak. I loved the tele-link between Bulma and Kakarott (I bet we all wish we had that ability), and I'm hoping that even though Veggie wants to avoid the royalty on Isles, that somehow he and Bulma meet (Marron does resemble Bulma, don't ya think? ^_^). Until next update-Peace. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2002 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, add that A/N2 to Cell's thoughts and give him more background. Explain why he's different from the other Cell, like not having Frieza in him, wouldn't he look different? And where is Gero? Destroyed by Cell? Why did Gero create him, surely Cell thinks of that? Everyone wishes to know their purpose on this world.
Other than that, this chapter was again great. But, no Vegeta :`( Oh well, hope he's there next chappie. lol |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 16, 2002 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaahhh, every fic needs someone whose guts we can hate and you gave us 2. This should prove very interesting and at the same time screw up everyone's social calendar. Bulma should hit Chichi over the head with something so that she can forget about the other loser and and give her heart to Kakarrot. I mean can you imagine waking up to Hercule every morning :(?. I mean a face like that could bring about an early menstrual cycle (that's bad enough!). Can't wait to see what happens next. Later. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 12, 2002 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Gee, what a big surprise-it only took Marron 1.5 seconds to work out a "payment" plan with Narnack. At least she's gone and you can work on it becoming B/V. So is Veggiehead actually going after her? That would be a waste of time, because he doesn't care about Lady(?)M.
Can't wait for you to update this one, but I would like for you to get another chap out on Vegeta's Dating Adventure. Poor Danny, I can't begin to imagine what's gonna happen to him. Peace |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whew! Vegeta. Yeah, I feel better now. I like the whole key thing. There were some spelling errors and I would reccomend more details, but I liked this. Wouldn't be reading it otherwise ;)
So, how is Vegeta going to get to Bulma? Is Frieza in this? I do so love Frieza death scenes. Can't imagine why! lol
Marron? Interesting, I'd forgotten the color of her hair, but I only saw her on one episode and then I ignored her. She was--pointless. To Vegeta anyways. lol
Will Kakarott and Vegeta still have that animosity? Will Vegeta go to Bulma's planet because of Kakarott being there? Oh, interesting concept. I suppose Vegeta won't catch on to the fact that the color of her hair and the feelings he has for her means the 'writings' are speaking of her, will he? (snort) Men are so dense. lol
Please continue! |
Reviewed By: re-o-ko On: February 09, 2002 10:05 CST
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I really like this story! i hope bulma and vegeta get togther and chichi and goku too. keep going. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo this is getting good plz put up more. i want to see what happens.
cool fic,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 03:39 CST
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hey you! this sounds like its coming along great! in the beginning i totally freaked out because it was a b/g! hehe, as you can imagine i was like "WHAT?!?!?" But it all makes sense now :) i like it! i hope he "follows his writings" hehehe :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 09, 2002 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Keep goin'. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I had only to see your name on the story to know it was good. I hardly had to read it. Reading it merely confirmed it. You are a good writer! I can't wait to read the rest! Please continue. When Kakarott's name was mentioned I almost choked my food. I absolutely abhor B/K(G) pairings. But i like that you've kept them friends and let it be known that they aren't exactly thrilled with the prospect of being married. I can't wait till Vegeta shows up! (Look, I said can't instead of can! lol J/K ;) ) Ah, it's curtsy, not coutesy. Just thought I'd point it out. lol |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool idea! I really enjoyed it and want to see more posted asap!
P.S Thanks for reviewing my fic! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 07, 2002 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo!! Great stuff JB. Just one thing-how in the hell am I supposed to get a life when you and the other fab authors keep enticing me with your fics? Not bitchin, just amazed how you keep turning out such good stories. I love this AU B/V thing you got going here. I guess it's just a matter of time before B/V meet. I can't wait to read the next chap. Keep up the great work!! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2002 19:43 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic. you must up date soon! and im glad Marron is gone. she my have blue hair in this fic but shes still a blondy lil IQ. gomen to all blondys. i dont have anything agents blondys. heck my best friend and ex-boyfriend are both blondys. any way plz keep up the good work and is Marron coming back? i hope not. shes more a ditz then Sarina was in the beging of SM. and thats saying somthing. oh and ,Kahlan Nightwing, i must agre. men can be such bakas. you would think some of then would have some brains if they made it past 2nd grade. gomen i get into putting stuff up some times.
plz put the next up ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
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