| "Hatred and Despair" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: VampireGirl89 On: November 23, 2006 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It sound good so far. I'm really liking it. I would liekt o read more. Hope you dont take long to post the next chapter. Man, I can't wait to read more. E-mail me when you post your next chapter at vampire_girl89@sbcglobal.net. I really really am liking your story.
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Title: NOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: HieiLover2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS JUST NOT FAIR!!!!!! T.T T.T T.T IT IS SOOOO GOOD AND U JUST ***** TBC please update soon
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Reviewed By: Raezel On: May 17, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack, Karasu+happy=Kurama+punishment... that's gotta hurt so much. So so much pain... poor targeted Kurama. Nice story~
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Reviewed By: myluv2pop [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
o please update! another chapter!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well I guess I could give you one, seeing how hard it is to get reviews. Its okay so far, but you should try to make the story/chp longer, it really seams too short.
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Reviewed By: lil crazy head syco On: January 10, 2006 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O THATS IT!!! T_T Pwease update soon, kay? I was soooooooo into it and I want you to keep on writing. It truly was cool and I wanna finish. ^__^
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Reviewed By: digital syco On: December 31, 2005 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GYAAAAAH!!! Keep writing!! I wanna get to the 'good' part... ^.^ Add another chapter! Add another chapter!
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Reviewed By: SC On: December 13, 2005 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of Writing: not bad. Try not to foreshadow too early, especially in so short a piece. Good job in keeping the characters in their personalities, even if we haven't seen too much of that yet. Try not to be too overly dramatic, either; subtlety is good, it keeps your readers interested. And it's not wrong to have short installments, but readers tend to like longer ones ^_~. Spelling and Grammar: You're writing in past tense, right? So try not to switch onto present out of nowhere. i don't remember catching any spelling mistakes, but do watch for that. better than many ive seen. Originality/Creativity: Good work in citing the inspirational authors. i read "Raven" and i loved it, so i have great aspirations for this fic. Can't say much because there's not much here yet. Enjoyment Factor: Would be a 10 if first two were. there's nothing hindering this here that's independent of style and grammar. Overall: Can't wait for the next bit. HAVE FUN WRITING!!! SC
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 15:56 CST
Comment/Review:
i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Haven't made an account yet On: December 12, 2005 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please continue, I love Karasu stories!
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