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Reviewed By: kandi_heartz On: March 20, 2006 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay two chapters this time!! you really made my day with these, they were so unbelievable adorable!!! every five seconds i would let out a little squeal and my little brother would look at me like i was crazy XD aww its soooo cute!!! i really hope you keep going with this and show them rebuild their relationship with each other all over again. itd be so sweet, especially if you added in parallels of what happened the first time but still have new stuff [okay i hope this isnt starting to sound demanding or anything ^^;;] lol. this is definately one of my favorite furuba fanfics ^.^
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Reviewed By: Alton On: March 19, 2006 06:44 EST
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Omg I think im going to cry. This story was soooo good. I fell so bad for Kyo and I cant wait to see what happens. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (NSI) On: March 14, 2006 22:06 EST
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Hello again! Told ya I'd be back XD Anyways, another good chapter *nodds* good, good stuff. Just stopping by to say I was here and read your new chapter. I like the plot to this, haven't read a story like it for this series yet so I'm happy you thought of it and have been writing it. Anyways, until next time. Ja ne! Fujinakaheero (P.S. hope to see another chapter sometime in the near future)
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 05:12 EST
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Poor Kyo, having to start all over again is going to be really hard on him... But yay! Things are going to get even more interesting from this point on, I'm thinking. ^^
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (NSI) On: March 12, 2006 19:25 EST
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Heylo! Good chapter. Man, you've really got the characters in character. I will not lie, I like this story quite a bit. I was glad to see a new chapter up so soon. Your style of writing is very good and the idea is good as well. I like how the plot is developing and I hope to see some good chapters up again soon. So with that said I shall go for now. So keep up the good work! SO until next time, Ja ne! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: Lyra Kamiya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 15:08 EST
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Getting to be quite amusing. Not quite sure how they got away with shoving them in the same room, but the Sohmas are famous for being able to buy any plot hole they want to. I just have a feeling Akito's going to positively despise the way they're milking this loophole. Curious as to what Saki's sensing... oh, just write more, lol.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 11:37 EST
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lmao, nice twist, having TOhru and Kyo as roomies. And I'm really wondering what kind of waves would be so overwhelming to Hana? *thoughtful* Can't wait for the next chappie! ^^
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Reviewed By: Cassie Parris [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 01:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your style, your expressions, your mature voice in all that you write. You write facinating things, and this story 'selfish' is almost more delightful then the true plot of Hana no Yume--for the manga seems to be taking a turn for the worst in ch 122-123. I must say 'Bravo!' This story; It's creative, exceptionally interesting, and I thirst for so much more. Consider me a huge fan! I've been a fan for a while via you being one of the betas for Sueric, but I rarely review because I don't know what to say. But after reading this chapter, I finally found my voice. And, I just wanted to say, your splendid! Keep it up and may the year of dog treat you well! Sincerely, Cassie-san
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Reviewed By: kandi_heartz On: March 07, 2006 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chapter!! it was a little confusing in certain parts through, especially the first half. when you said that tohru was craddling kyou in her arms [or something like that] i wasnt sure if she was actually awake and had just pretended to have her memories erased or not but it all came together in the end. you're really good with coming up with original ideas. i had no idea what you were going to do and i liked how you added in some humor in the last bit. hopefully the next chapter wont be the last...theres so much potential for a great future storyline after this! no matter what you choose to do though, im sure its gonna turn out great! ^.~
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Title: LadyBarrista
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 01:47 EST
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I am really enjoying this story and am looking forward to reading future chapters. Sending out prayers that your muses and RL encourage you to update soon. I've also added your name to my favorites list here since I was originally reading your stories on FF.net and I didn't realize that you had an account here. Looking forward to reading future works from you.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 05:38 EST
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Aki-san's so mean! *starts to cry again* It took me forever to read this chapter, it's so sad... However, I can't wait to see how everyone plans to make things right...
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Reviewed By: Klove0511 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 14:10 EST
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Please update this soon. It's awesome, and very emotionally charged. I hope the next chapter gets up sooner than it took the second chapter to get up. Great job!
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Reviewed By: kandi_heartz On: February 22, 2006 22:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a long wait but definately worth it!! you're such a talented author and i love how you write!! ive read several fanfics that try to show this part of the manga but none of them even compare to this one. i really love how you wrote this entire thing but i also think it would've been interesting and realy sad/bittersweet if hatori really had erased kyou's memories and then tohru came only to find out that he didnt remember her anymore.....waiting patiently for the next chapter. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Lyra Kamiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 11:29 EST
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Very interesting where this is going. I must say, though, that I doubt Akito would actually keep such a promise. It just doesn't seem like something e'd do. Aside from that, wonderful all around, I love how you've personified Kyou's torments. I almost wish we could know Uo and Hana's reactions to their little Tohru losing her innocense though.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 10:10 EST
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I think I'm gonna cry... This is such a good fic, and it's also quite emotional... I can't wait to see what comes next.
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