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| "Love and Vengence" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Because of your suggestion, I decided to take the liberty to read your stories. I couldn't help, but notice a few grammical errors in your story. May I advise a beta to read over your work? Please take no offense to this review, but it may help you improve. Other than that, I liked the story line. It has much potential. Every write, me included, has the ablilty to improve. I hope you continue with this interesting tale and never stop writing. By the way, Bankotsu's halberd is spelled: Banryuu. And are the others, (Kags, Kik, Mir, San, other Sinchinintai, etc.) going to be in it?
| Reviewed By: Ultimategamer982 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 19:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I cant beleive u reveiwered ur own fan fic but then again i dont blame u it was pretty interesting Good job
| Reviewed By: Mandy h On: November 27, 2005 04:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!! U MADE MY CHARACTER JUST PERFECT!! IT WAS FUNNY WITH ME AND ICE'S FIGHT!!! LOL.
| Reviewed By: Kagome_Warrior_Miko12 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY GURL! IT ROCKS!!! HOPE ROX TOO! wait, i am hope. lol! very good so far, i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
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