| "Something To Rely On" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 17:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the plot you've thought up, only problem is I can't read huge paragraphs. I always windup reading the same line over and over again. Anyway you can format it with readable paragraphs?
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 14:22 CST
Comment/Review:
The idea appears to be a good one, but it seems to at least start off with everything in one huge paragraph, and it drives me insane to read that. Could you edit that? If you do then I'll be more than happy to read it ^_^
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