Reviewed By: rainsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 20:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is really good! But, you really should explain why his pokemon can do that, make their attacks boomerang. And your battles aren't really interesting.
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