Reviewed By: KoroshiyaZwei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 14:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh God...I really hope this is supposed to be some sort of parody, or mischevious little drabble - Oh wait, I don't see Comedy in the list of genre. Do yourself and all the writers and readers here at Mediaminer a favor: Stop writing this story, learn how to write, or simply lay your hands on some busy train tracks for a couple of hours. No one likes "stories" like the one you're trying to write, no one likes overpowered SIs, intentional Gary Stus, or anyone who can't spell "DISCLAIMER" in his "DISCLAIMER". Again, I ask you, stop writing this story, delete it, and learn how to write...because this is the nicest review you're going to get.
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