| "My green Eyed Master" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: SummerRose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2013 18:01 EDT
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 00:00 EDT
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wow this is really good plz update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: KageMori [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 23:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this is pretty good and very intresting to say the least. i hope that you will continue it as i truely enjoyed reading the story and im curious as to what will happen to our dear kagome next.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 04:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 16:40 EDT
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you left a cliffy. that is so mean! lol. i was hoping you would update this. i look forward to reading more when you update. i am really curious where kurama is taking kagome.
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Reviewed By: CapriaStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 13:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. Your writing is very engaging and I got swept away. Hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 00:38 EDT
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Well the only real complaint I have is that I've read this before & I don't think anything new has been added since the last time I read it, heck I think there may even be a chapter or 2 missing since the last time. Also you have Kurama's human name misspelled, I've seen like 3 to 5 versions of his given name but his family name is definitely goofed up here, the common spelling is Shuuichi Minamino, his family name is Minamino not Minamoto, I think you got it crossed with Yu-Gi-Oh or something. Hope this helps.
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Really Love this story. I love the way you portrayed kurama by being more true to his demon side than most authors have been. I think this story is exceptional and would love for you to continue writing it but if not can you please find someone else to continue on with your idea because I really love where this story is going and it would be a big disappointment if the story didn't get itself told. Smiles
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Reviewed By: Magiknight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 16:30 EST
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I actually loved the way Kurama was portrayed, most writers forget that his inner demon is a ruthless criminal. Too many fictions put him as some pansy ass nice guy when in truth he always seemed more calm yet calculating to me. I like that he basicly stold her. I seriously wish you would continue this story.
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Title: A Shame
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 19:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a shame that you have abandoned such a fine story. It was just getting good, too. It would be nice if you picked it back up again, and continued this story. Please consider continuing it.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Kurama convinces Kagome that they are soul mates. How Inuyasha reacts to the fact that Kagome was not dreaming of him.
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Reviewed By: LadyKenyanna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 05:56 EDT
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MORE
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Reviewed By: Demonic_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 18:00 EDT
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omg... please tell me you haven't given up on this fic!! If you're still planning on finishing it (and I hope to hell you are) please let me know. My email is eternal_demonic_angel@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 15:23 EST
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I really liked this story right up until the fourth chapter. I know you warned in the beginning that kurama was going to be ooc, but did you mean to turn him into a badguy? I mean, unless you have some clever explaination for him acting the way he was, there's no real reason for you to turn him into some sort of sexual sadist, getting his kicks from the terror of someone he claims is going to be his mate. As for mechanics, again you were doing great until this last chapter, when you decided to throw in a bunch of punctuation for different character's telapathy. As the great writer i know you are, you should be able to pick one punctuation or just italicize it, and then indicate who's talking the same way you do with regular speach. Apart from the few things you have room to improve on, there are a number of areas you are excelling in. Your descriptions are great, giving a lot of detail without going overboard and boring the reader. And your sex scenes? I'm going to go ahead and say it: they're frikking hot. Maybe not the best i've ever read, but they're definately up there. I really don't like reading flat-out smut, so i really appreciate the tasteful way you describe...things. Others may not have the same opinion, but this is mine, and i like your writing. Anyway, you had asked for some feedback, and i decided i could take a couple of minutes out of my day to comply. You're doing an excellent job! Keep it up!
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Title: Shadow Girl
Reviewed By: Shadow Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. It was very good. Please update soon. This is getting very good and Ii want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Sailor_moon1996 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 23:16 EST
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please update soon.....i really want to know where they take her? does she tell them about her mission...does he go with her and such...
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