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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 09:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so cool!! that was a great chapter, though i'm wondering if i've read it before... lolz. idont know.
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Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!! she's going to die!!! she can't!! is she going to go home yet? hey, that was sango miroku and inuyasha there. i just realised that. cool!!! great chapter.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 13:32 EDT
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Wonderful chapter. The action junkie in me is very pleased. What a fight! You wrote it very well too. And you left it at such a cliffie!!!!! I am so excited about what will happen next. The whole sword subplot there is great. Now she has a dragon at her beck and call if she can learn to tame it. Oooh, I wonder if Ah Uhn would protect her now. Wouldn't that piss off Sesshoumaru!? Just thinking about it makes me smile in gratification. He sure is a bastard. Now, let's see how you plan to save her! *bouncing legs and thrumming thumbs in anticipation* Snowfall
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Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, reviewing again. i've read this story loads of times but i haven't gotten a chance to review. yea, so here it is. great chapters, but i wonder what her purpose of being there was in the first place. i also wonder if she would ever get home. your writing style is great so there is nothing to comment about that. i have to say the story gets better and better each chapter. hmm...if its not too much trouble could you also include a preview of the next chapter? keep it up! i'll be reading. i apoligise for not reivewing earlier.
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Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya(not logged on) On: September 04, 2006 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man, so cool!! just so totally!!!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngelsQuill On: September 01, 2006 02:27 EDT
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I heart this entire story! it's great, and not a mary-sue! yay!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love what you have done whithtis story so far please update as soon as you can thank you. It isn't going to be that she is the re-incarnate of Kagara is it? I hope not also Kags is theauthoer of the stories in her time isn't she. Or is she in the past I was a little comfuses then.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was totally fucking awesome. Still the same wit as always. Sessmoumaru with PMS! LOL The momentary respect shown to your character was a nice break. Ooooh, he got a hard on. *snicker* Oh yeah. I think that he went off the deep end telling her that he wanted to mate with her...and then comparing her to Kagura! OMG! What an idiot. Hm, he does think that she is beautiful. That's a plus. Hm, I need to be reminded of what she looks like. I gotta go back and read from the beginning. I wonder what he will do in the morning. Will she escape before he wakes up? Will he see how sweet she looks while sleeping and try to leave only to be stopped by the ward? Oh, that would be funny. He would be sooooo pissed. But, wards should not be able to stop him. Just a note: a person can die of thirst even where there is snow. Snow makes so little moisture once it is melted. That's why it is sometimes so difficult to make snowcream. I haven't had that in years. Mmmm *eyes roll back in head* Oooh, can't wait for what you have in store for us next chapter since Sesshoumaru will have his powers back and your character will be at his mercy. ^_^ Snow---damn spam protection code is a worthless piece of shit. Fourth try.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Snowfall1 On: May 10, 2006 09:54 EDT
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Poor Inuyasha. So upset that Kagome is gone. Too bad. Hm, I don't remember anything about the curse. I'll have to go back and see if it was mentioned before. Maybe your original character was sent back in order to save Sesshoumaru, in more ways than one? I'm glad that they are finally forced to be in close proximity to one another. Hehe, I can just imagine what he'll be like when he wakes up. He'll probably just give her the brush off, saying that he didn't need her help. Stupid youkai. Well, great chapter. Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 08:58 EDT
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I rarely read fics with original characters, but I am enjoying your story. You have a nice build up to the actually meeting with the original characters and did a great job with their characterizations. I love your writing style. There is a lot of wit. Don't stop writing. You're doing a great job. Snowfall
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Reviewed By: Aria-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 12:15 EDT
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Cool story ^_^ I love the fact that the main character has Sesshoumaru's markings tattooed on her wrist. I have Sesshoumaru's crescent moon tattooed on my left wrist so I can totally relate.... Well, thanks for writing and I hope you update soon :) xxxx Aria-Chan
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Title: You acknowleged me???
Reviewed By: Hello lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 18:39 EST
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It's sooooo great to be acknowlege!! Great chapter!!! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: crissy-cris [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 17:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first story I've read since I've been on this sight and I am soooooooo happy I found it because I love the plo. In fact, I've been looking for an "oc" story of this kind. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: littlerin On: March 02, 2006 10:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope those were made-up names and not real ones, because it's a bad idea to give out real names online. I usually don't like origional characters, but it was well written and interesting. Be careful with Fluffy, though. He's the least emotional and the most commonly put out of character.
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Title: COOL!
Reviewed By: Hello lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 22:42 EST
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I LIKE IT I LOVE IT I WANT SOME MORE OF IT!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON...please! And if it helps then you're so in my fav.!
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