| "The Alternate Storyteller" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: SilverTigress On: July 09, 2011 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! I must say this is a darn good fic so far. There are a few grammatical/spelling errors, but they aren't bad enough to really cause a hiccup in the action. So far I'm really enjoying your story. I can't wait to see what happens next! There are a lot of little things going on, so it makes me believe you have quite a way to go so all these loose ends can be tied up. I hope you haven't given up on this story (looking back at your updates). But I know how life is, so I thought I'd comment and give you some encouragement (hopefully) to keep writing this one! *throws cookies* Please? Adding to my fav's so I can check up on ya! :D |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2011 21:09 EST
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Thank you so much for the update! I'm always waiting for a new chapter. ^_^ Awesome battle scenes. I hope she makes a difficult mate for awhile just to pay him back forcing her into it. Was she holding back so that she wouldn't destroy the planet? That's the only thing that I can figure because she could have beat him if she didn't care what it took. Sometimes I miss stuff when I read. I will be reading this chapter a few more times. ^_^ Thanks again for all your hard work! |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2010 03:36 EDT
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I've really missed this story. Have you discontinued it?
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Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 18:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kijinko needs to get stronger.
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Title: CAUTION
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 20:12 EST
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Hope this helps. When I went back to a previous chapter, I saw this: 'Disclaimer: Please see the Prologue.' Normally, you would think that one disclaimer would be enough. I used to think so. However, a webpage is what each chapter is and can be accessed individually, so it can be seen as its own site. For original authors/artists, a disclaimer needs to be on each webpage that contains anything that belongs to them. I keep my disclaimers in a separate document and just copy and paste them to the bottom of each chapter. So far, your story hasn't been taken down, but it's better to be safe. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 20:02 EST
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Yay! Thank you for posting another chapter. I really love the action in this story. Ooooh, first she is told that Sesshoumaru was trying to save her, then she was told he wanted to kill her. WTF? I think someone is confused. Heheh. I'd love to know what's going through Sesshoumaru's head. Gonna have to read the previous chapter again. It was good to see Wu Fei again, and I'm glad he gave her some training. She sure keeps getting herself into some awesome messes. ^_^ I hope the boys don't track her down before she gets well. You know, she's as stubborn as Inuyasha. It was great to 'see' them go at it. Those two would have made great siblings. It's a good thing that Ryuu can save her when she's being an idiot. LOL I'm wondering if she is going to have a hard time keeping hidden now. She might need a new disguise. And, I hope Ryuu doesn't get weakened too much while she's recovering. You do great imagery. I love the fantasy feel of this. Oooh, when do we get to see the golden strands in her skin again? That was so cool! This was another great, action-filled chapter that has left me breathless. I'm anxious for another. Don't take that as pressure, just as expressing my delight with the story. ^_^
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Title: CH10
Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 04:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome to see you have updated. Not many people do updated in mediaminer. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 10:33 EDT
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I just realized something. The dragon had chosen her before he started to fly away. He had saved her from Sesshoumaru on purpose! The heads had been discussing whether or not she should be their new master. Awesome! Told you I was going to read it again. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 09:54 EDT
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I pimped your fic on my lj. Let's hope it gets you some readers. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 09:43 EDT
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Oooh, that was cool. Thank you so much for getting out this chapter. The dragon saved her and she still has the sword! Then he trained her in a far away place. Awesome. I was worried about what would happen. Wouldn't I love to be able to do all the things that she can. She should have a chance to defend herself against Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru now. Can't wait to see their first battle. I sure would love to see Sesshoumaru have a freak out moment. I think her sword is much better than his. Awesome dragon. I hope it doesn't give her too much trouble. I wonder if the dragon is into some deep philosophical thought about not fighting until its necessary or something. That would be funny. I'm still waiting to see if the sword is evil and if it will remain with her if she goes back to the future. Hah, I bet he really didn't kill all of his previous masters. He's just trying to scare her. Hm, just a wish I guess. Oooh, maybe the old masters are in the sword too! I have to wonder if the sword is truly evil. Also, I'm wondering how Sesshoumaru and Inu will change their mind about her now that she got rid of the dragon. She was very brave. I really need to read the story again. But...I'm going to read this chapter again first! Wonderful chapter! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 14:23 EDT
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Hey, I hope you're okay. I really miss this fic. If you're okay, could you let me know if you plan on finishing it? Thanks so much. ^_^ Snowfall
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Reviewed By: Sophia-chan On: September 26, 2006 15:42 EDT
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Ooooo this was good please update soon!!!! I want to see her as the new Dragon Mistress and I wonder what Sesshy will think of that!!!!! :) email me if you can so I know when you update at - senoritasophia@hotmail.com thanks!!!!
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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 09:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so cool!! that was a great chapter, though i'm wondering if i've read it before... lolz. idont know.
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Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!! she's going to die!!! she can't!! is she going to go home yet? hey, that was sango miroku and inuyasha there. i just realised that. cool!!! great chapter.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 13:32 EDT
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Wonderful chapter. The action junkie in me is very pleased. What a fight! You wrote it very well too. And you left it at such a cliffie!!!!! I am so excited about what will happen next. The whole sword subplot there is great. Now she has a dragon at her beck and call if she can learn to tame it. Oooh, I wonder if Ah Uhn would protect her now. Wouldn't that piss off Sesshoumaru!? Just thinking about it makes me smile in gratification. He sure is a bastard. Now, let's see how you plan to save her! *bouncing legs and thrumming thumbs in anticipation* Snowfall
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