| "Kaoru's Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This short story captures what the RuroKen series is all about. Please write more on this topic!
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Reviewed By: Yarisha The Fox Demon On: March 14, 2004 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SO AWESOME AND SO CUTE! Write more!!!!!!!! I loved it well i g2g now so... ~Ja ne!~
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Reviewed By: DayDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell? Sorry for the bad words but, You FANFIC WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! Write the next story, I want to see Hitokiri Battousai making Kaoru his Woman. That is God Damn Awesome! |
Reviewed By: kagoma On: June 09, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool coool cooool drama/romanse (^_^) goman i cant spell hehe ,, by the way my name is really really really ***** million years (^-~)later*****really is my name |
Reviewed By: kagoma On: June 09, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool coool cooool drama/romanse (^_^) goman i cant spell hehe ,, by the way my name is really really really ***** million years later*****really is my name (^-~) |
Reviewed By: DFourthHorseman [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good but it could have been a lil better I guess. Like, the young Batttousai's logic about why he can't just be content are really flawed, the fight seemed a lil (I don't know how to say it) fake i guess, and that part where she entered his mind and released him from his sins seemed a lil cliche. Oh this isn't a flame, I really thought the story was a good idea and pretty original, a really good start for a K&K story, but it could have used more emotion, realism, and a longer story. I hope you'll considering editing it a bit and reposting it, I'd love to read the redone version. Good luck. |
Reviewed By: sley On: August 31, 2001 06:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey..how did this came to your mind?Anyway i can tell you that i really like your story...!Itīs good.. |
Reviewed By: nickie On: September 01, 2001 04:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool drama. |
Reviewed By: tuna On: September 01, 2001 04:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it. Write more! |
