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| "Tired of Waiting" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: kawaii_hime_ceres [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 08:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
You don't find many that go into great detail. you've done a wonderful job from start to finish. very hot! :D
| Reviewed By: Kurayami Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^___^ Me again!! *drooling great big buckets of drool* That was so yummy XD Very kinky, especially with the bondage and Yugi bein' all aggressive yet still in character; I likes. The mushy-ness was a little too over-the-top to be entirely believable, I thought, but the lemon was lovely so who cares? And Yugi and Yami would be extremely mushy with each other, I guess... Was this your first fic, then? If so, REALLY great job, I've written over forty fics and I still can't write lemons that long XD Hmm... *dreamy sigh* My head is full of pretty pictures now; thanx! XD
| Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really cute! I loved Yugi tying Yami up and getting all agressive. I'd love to read more like it.
| Title: Loved It!
Reviewed By: Hieigirl 12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved your story, it rocked. Can't wait to see what eles you make. ^_^
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