| "Where Silence Meant Everything" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: not login in On: December 09, 2005 14:49 CST
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I like reading your story I hope you up date soon
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 14:14 CST
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Alright, this is well written, if a little disturbing. You have some points that probably should be clearer. Like what Inu-Yasha is thinking at the time. I realized you were trying to dance around what happened to Kagome, but you ended up dancing a little too far. His thoughts are too incredibly vauge, you might want to clear them up a bit while still trying to avoid saying the hidden facts. (Trust me this ain't easy.) Otherwise I didn't see any problems in grammer, spelling, and other whatnot. You seem to have a solid strand, and you give some very good descriptions. Good job and keep submitting to FFARG.
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Title: I Heart you too! ^_^
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 07, 2005 21:59 CST
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This was the scariest chap you've written thus far. You know that don't ya? That's why it was so hard to write. The last chap of my fic 'Forgive Me Anythng' took about 3-4 days to write because it was so emotional. This was too. I love the way you can't tell the difference between dream & reality, yet it all pulls together to make sense. Even now I can't tell if kagome is dead or if she's having visions because her spirit/aura is restless. Wow. Terrific job!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 20:23 CST
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wow. im practically speechless. this is 1 of the best fanfictions ive ever read. u capture the moods and characterization perfectly. i cant wait 4 ur next chapter.
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Title: speachless
Reviewed By: smittin kittin (nlo) On: December 05, 2005 17:43 CST
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wow! i'm so glad i read this! u honestly moved me 2 tears w/this compelling work of fiction. u've captured all the anguish of a complicated love w/out losing the wistful tendral of hope 4 a happy ending, bravo! i'm adding u 2 my fav list & & recommending this 2 my friends as i nervously awaiting ur next chap. may ur muses emplore u 2 write swiftly.
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Title: Compelling!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 14:35 CST
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I love this story. When i got the update, I all but flew to read it then frowned realizing you'd updated & i hadn't known! :-( I'm just shocked at the amount of angst you've got here! I am such an angst lover -I think love should be earned, heh. So suffer the little Inus! lol Seriously tho, this is great stuff! I'm ready for the next chap (hopefully I can keep ya birthin' em'!) ^_^
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Reviewed By: Devil's Dance On: December 01, 2005 01:56 CST
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I enjoyed this! It's very sweet and sad at the same time. If you don't have a beta yet I would be happy to be your beta. sweet_heartsbff@hotmail.com
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Title: WOW.
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: November 30, 2005 22:36 CST
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This is getting really good & you are just putting out chaps like nobody's business! WOOT! I'm shocked that you don't have more reviews. This is really, VERY good. I'm trippin over Kagome. Inu all but admitted everything & she's still being spacey. Not to mention the whole jewel thing...that's starting to get to me. Can he control his urge to have it? Will kags choose to leave him or her family? Maaany Qs. I anxiously await the next chap ^_^
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Title: You are really cranking them out...goody!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: November 30, 2005 20:21 CST
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Very nice lemon. It wasn't graphic, but still said plenty. Well done. I guess my Q was answered, he really was kissing her, lol. It'll be interesting to see what happens now that they've done the deed.
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Title: That was quick!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: November 30, 2005 17:21 CST
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Nice, fast update. Gotta love it. I'm a tiny bit confused, but i can tell it's the kind of confusion that will clear up the more i read. So let's see if i'm close...Kagome is obviously anorexic at this point. Basically starving herself...InuYasha wants the jewel so bad it's killing him...Sango & Miro are helpess in this...and kags & Inu can't see past their own odd needs to really be there for eachother. Did Inu really kiss her or was that some sorta flashback?
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Title: Really nice
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 13:25 CST
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Intriguing. I like it much. Btw, you wouldn't be from AFF would you? If so, i'm glad you're continuing. If not, just ignore that :-) Anyway, i'm definitely looking forward to the next chap. It's quite different from anything i've read in awhile.
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