"Family" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Treeonice On: January 30, 2007 18:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked that very much because the chappies were short, sweet, and to the point. The way you could make that better is if you had made them more descriptive. I mean added more chapters during Raven's pregnancy. I love preggie fics!!!
| Title: *sigh* Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 22:07 CST Comment/Review: I like it. I don't know why, but this is just perfect. It makes little sense some times, but it's perfect. A wonderful rendition of a famliy (albiet a superpowered one) trying to live together and grow as peacibly as possible. I love it. Ja Ne, Zirra ^_^
| Title: Wow Reviewed By: Juelexi_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 11:06 CST Comment/Review: I really liked these stories! Great job! I'm looking forward to more!
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