| "Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 10:47 CST
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I didn't read it yet, but all i'm sayin' is that i'm just VERY happy that this is a Hiei/Kagome pairing, didn't read it yet, rememba ... as long as it's a Hiei/Kagome pairing (which it is), then I'm reading it.
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Reviewed By: SoulsAir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 04:00 CST
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I like your story.. please update soon... now adays its hard to keep me interested enough to want to finish a story... but yours captured my attention.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: December 08, 2005 00:33 CST
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This is great. Please update real soon. Yikes, not a very good first imperession.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: latina chicka On: December 06, 2005 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved ur story so much but update
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Title: Not Bad
Reviewed By: Little Rin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.... The characters are way off, but the spelling errors seem to mainly be forgotten letters. Forgotten has 2 Ts. "Over his regular clothing he wors a long black cape" Wore. You also misspelled different. I don't remember the others right now. Overall, it's not bad so far. I'll be waiting on the rest.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89(not logged in) On: December 05, 2005 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The cliffy was just sooooo wrong(pouts) I really want to see the rest!!!! (smiles) Update PLEASE your fic is on my faves so update!!!!:3
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Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, evil cliffies, you are so mean. So my guess is that Kagome and Shippo are the fourth and fifth members, or is it Kagome and someone else? I loved the character descriptions, you got them all pegged. I wait to the team meets kagome, update soon!
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:13 CST
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I think I can guess who the two people are that are joining the team, and if I'm right...I just can't wait to see Yusuke's reaction! lmao. So please update soon!!!! I loved your description of Hiei and Kurama! ~DA
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Reviewed By: kougalover123 (nsi) On: December 04, 2005 21:34 CST
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i love your descriptions of the yuyu team . please update again soon i can't wait to see the first meeting between Kagome and the team.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 19:38 CST
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Oh now that is an evil place to leave off lmao Gotta love your description of Hiei, he certainly is my own personal fantasy come to life. It is his right arm that is bandaged as well. Can't wait to see who these two additional people are. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 13:49 CST
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Interesting start, I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Update soon please
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Title: the story must go on
Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok that was the beginning of what I'm sure will be a great story. Please continue on. I like that you didn't make Kagome weak and that she is kind of dark and cold. I personally have always seen her as being exteremely powerfull and having a bit of a dark side, as I would think that anyone thrown into a situation such as that at a young age would have. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 14:58 CST
Comment/Review:
i love it so far please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please update very soon I want to see more of this story. thank you.
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Title: I don't like it
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE THIS IS WONDERFUL!!!! I am a very picky person so UPDATE!!! You are going on my fave story list so don't worry :3
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