| "Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two chapters in a row with evil cliffies, you must love seeing us squirm. What a sad chapter, poor Kagome can't win. My question is how will Kagome fall in love with Hiei if he killed her family. Even with Kagome's big heart, I couldn't see her forgiving him for that unless he didn't do it. You never said that she actually saw Hiei, she only heard his name, right? Maybe he was being set up or something. Whatever it is you've got yourself one hell of a good story. Update soon, I need to know how this plays out.
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Reviewed By: nightangel15notloggedin On: December 11, 2005 22:40 CST
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your story is so good, i cant wait till you update. if kagome hates hiei for killing her family, how will they fall in love...thats gonna be a hell of a plotline. ooh ooh, is koenma gonna get his ass kicked by kagome any time soon by chance?
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Reviewed By: SoulsAir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 20:10 CST
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I know you just updated and all but PLEASE!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: leowit On: December 11, 2005 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story it great just stop wit the cliffys
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Title: EISLE
Reviewed By: latina chicka On: December 09, 2005 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY I LOVE KAG/HIEI IT'S A GREAT STORY SO UP DATE BYE
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (not logged in) On: December 08, 2005 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update *grunts* stupid cliffy.
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 10:53 CST
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Damn, I just read it and damn, it sucks for kagome and hiei. can't believe it. ^sigh^ but it IS still a hiei/kagome pairing, right? ^glares^
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 10:47 CST
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I didn't read it yet, but all i'm sayin' is that i'm just VERY happy that this is a Hiei/Kagome pairing, didn't read it yet, rememba ... as long as it's a Hiei/Kagome pairing (which it is), then I'm reading it.
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Reviewed By: SoulsAir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 04:00 CST
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I like your story.. please update soon... now adays its hard to keep me interested enough to want to finish a story... but yours captured my attention.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: December 08, 2005 00:33 CST
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This is great. Please update real soon. Yikes, not a very good first imperession.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: latina chicka On: December 06, 2005 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved ur story so much but update
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Title: Not Bad
Reviewed By: Little Rin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.... The characters are way off, but the spelling errors seem to mainly be forgotten letters. Forgotten has 2 Ts. "Over his regular clothing he wors a long black cape" Wore. You also misspelled different. I don't remember the others right now. Overall, it's not bad so far. I'll be waiting on the rest.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89(not logged in) On: December 05, 2005 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The cliffy was just sooooo wrong(pouts) I really want to see the rest!!!! (smiles) Update PLEASE your fic is on my faves so update!!!!:3
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Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, evil cliffies, you are so mean. So my guess is that Kagome and Shippo are the fourth and fifth members, or is it Kagome and someone else? I loved the character descriptions, you got them all pegged. I wait to the team meets kagome, update soon!
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:13 CST
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I think I can guess who the two people are that are joining the team, and if I'm right...I just can't wait to see Yusuke's reaction! lmao. So please update soon!!!! I loved your description of Hiei and Kurama! ~DA
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