| "Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: kougalover123 (nsi) On: December 04, 2005 21:34 CST
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i love your descriptions of the yuyu team . please update again soon i can't wait to see the first meeting between Kagome and the team.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 19:38 CST
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Oh now that is an evil place to leave off lmao Gotta love your description of Hiei, he certainly is my own personal fantasy come to life. It is his right arm that is bandaged as well. Can't wait to see who these two additional people are. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 13:49 CST
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Interesting start, I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Update soon please
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Title: the story must go on
Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok that was the beginning of what I'm sure will be a great story. Please continue on. I like that you didn't make Kagome weak and that she is kind of dark and cold. I personally have always seen her as being exteremely powerfull and having a bit of a dark side, as I would think that anyone thrown into a situation such as that at a young age would have. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 14:58 CST
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i love it so far please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please update very soon I want to see more of this story. thank you.
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Title: I don't like it
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE THIS IS WONDERFUL!!!! I am a very picky person so UPDATE!!! You are going on my fave story list so don't worry :3
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