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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
How crazy this all seems to be. I have to admit, my gut reaction when Hiei was thrown against the wall was that he was the infected thing attached to Kurama, but then I was like "No...wait for it and don't make assumptions." Now I feel silly, but I'm also hoping the rest of the chapters take the hint and get themselves out ASAP.
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Reviewed By: mizthang222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 01:13 CDT
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I haven't reviewed this yet, so I suppose I will now. Once again, you have amazed me with your ability to write so good. I envy you, I really do. And when I saw you updated today, I was so happy. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: mizaminer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 08:08 CDT
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write more please!!!!!!! *pouts*
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 00:15 CDT
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YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!! You have no idea how happy and surprised I was when I saw that. And don't worry, none of your regular readers will even think about commenting on OOC-ness. So much has happened to change the characters, and there is absolutely nothing wrong with that. This was a cute little chapter what with the wedding preparations and all. And it was so funny envisioning Kurama and Hiei dancing and Hiei simply resting against him! Too Cute!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 00:02 CDT
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Woho, I cannot imagine someone picking up the series at this point. But I liked it; Hiei's explanation to Yukina was logical and thoughtful, yet sort of dodgy in a very Hiei-esque manner. I think it suited him well. The whole thing was nice enough, for its shortness (not that anything is wrong with a short chapter, but the series has been so great that I am always eagerly awaiting more). Short and sweet, perhaps. Well written.
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Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 23:08 CDT
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Okay, where ARE you? It's been forever.... I wanna know what happens!!!! I'm gonna cry if I don't get an update soon.... Though I guess I shouldn't talk. I have this one story that I haven't updated since....I think....August. But I really really really REALLY wanna read your update so that I can finally have some PEACE!!! Update, update, UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Darkness Child [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love yur stories. I really can't wait untill you update. So please update soon.
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 13:05 CST
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Well, I'm back from no internet and happy to see that this is going to be a wonderful story just like the ones before it. Please update soon! ~France
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 19:15 CST
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 00:33 CST
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nice chapter. thankfully, mm.org is letting me review this time. this was a sweet deviation from the normal KuramaHiei always going on in the stories. it was cute to see a different couple, for a change. all i can say is, Kurama has been a good influence on Hiei for the demon to not even get angry when Kuwabara asked him for Yukina's hand in marriage. it was almost brotherly, that small moment of congratulations they shared at the end. great job! update soon! and don't spend tootootoo long on the fluff. though it's awesome, i'm in love with the angst. ^^
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Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot woot!! Heh I like it. You always do have a way of taking commonly written plot ideas and making them new and interesting. And now I have the image of a couple of hellion kids chanting at "Uncle Hiei" to do something for them. Mmmm I wonder how the Koorime would deal with finding out Yukina is marrying a male...... Good luck with the next chapter I'll be waiting with the rest of the fans.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 22:10 CST
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Interesting as always. So this story is about Hiei's family, then? Well, if it turns out to take itself in that direction, it'll be a nice change. If not, I'm sure you'll make it somehow original. I have a lot of faith in you as a writer, could you tell?
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 15:53 CST
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continue soon! This is a great story already! I like the dancing to Kurama's heart beat, nice touch
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Reviewed By: ShadysGothicBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 23:40 CST
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ur storys are soooo good im seriously in luv with them lol
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 23:01 CST
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I am mildly ashamed to admit, I kind of forgot this was coming. But now it's here, and I couldn't be more excited. Yeah, it's major fluff, but I suspect some more drama will be rearing its head in short order. Not that I'm posing any requirements or requests; I'm eager to see where you take this one. So best of luck to you and keep up the good work.
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