| "New Story (No Title Yet)" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 23:11 CDT
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Bravo!! Keep the chapters coming on this fic. someone putting brains into the characters instead of brawn! Love it!
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Reviewed By: neosailorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 18:24 CST
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No offence, but 106 degrees Farenhite is not very hot. Our bodies are on an average 98.6 degrees. 106 is just slitly warm water, it's what nursing homes use on their patiens so they don't harm them. It you are talking Celcius then it to hot, because water boils at 100 and the water could not get up to 106 and the people that got into would not be able to servive it. I don't mean to put you down, but that is just a fact of life and nature. I really do like this fic and can't wait till the next chapter is up. I just wanted you to know. I always thought that water that was like a hundred degrees was hot, but I learned differently when I took a Nursing Assistants corse. Just thought I would let you know.
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Title: New Story (No Title Yet)
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: New Story (No Title Yet)
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: New Story (No Title Yet)
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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