"The Dark And The Light" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Nikolle On: November 12, 2014 19:39 EST Comment/Review:
Yes! That is how Sesshomaru x Naraku should be written!
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Reviewed By: Ivoryblood On: December 23, 2009 01:44 EST Comment/Review: u totally stole this from someone else!!!!!i read this before on another site! that's fucking low!!!
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Reviewed By: Shedra [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 21:59 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Very nice. I likey. I only ask that you draw out the descriptions of the dirty bits, if there is an hour of rough man-loving, then give me a good ten minute read! And be more subtle about the Dark and Light comparison, talk about the contrast of their skin and hair. I know that it's a fanfiction and all the readers know what the characters look like, but I should be able to paint a picture for myself from you descriptions. Even though I enjoyed it going without. I'm going to read summore of your works and get just as longwinded about it.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 04:29 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very nice and Smexy!!!*smiles*
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Reviewed By: Leo818^.^ On: October 28, 2006 14:51 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i loved it it soooo sexi i was almost druling. lol grat story love it
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 19:46 EDT Comment/Review: nice i liked it a lot i do think they're perfect together. they just dnt kno it yet lol. u should write another story like this let me kno wat u think of
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