| "30 one-shots" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: bark. meow. and CHICKEN!
Reviewed By: kissmybutt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hahahaha you know me. bleh. im tired. anywho, nice stories. work on grammar tho. what ever happened to the funky endings where you threatened people with weapons? i missed those. gum is good. so very very good. MUAHAHAHA. yeah. loved them anyways. the stories i mean. yeah. get your head out of the guter. hahaha yeah.
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Reviewed By: lovidovi On: December 30, 2005 21:16 CST
Comment/Review:
um....i think that it would be best if u worked on the summary cuz itz really sad.
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Reviewed By: lovidovi On: December 30, 2005 21:15 CST
Comment/Review:
um....i think that it would be best if u worked on the summary cuz itz really sad.
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Title: Who Cares if They're Short?
Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The stories are awesome! Sometimes I think I use that word too much, but who cares, they really are! The last one was really sad, I wonder if that could ever really happen to him. *clenches fist* It better not! You're doing great.
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