"The Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Hakudoshi's gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 19:06 CST Comment/Review: DAMNIT!!!! TELL US WHO THE PAIRING IS FOR GOD'S SAKES!!!!
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Reviewed By: WinterSolstice1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 13:40 CDT Comment/Review: I think it was Rin/ Sess. -- Despite the fact that it was only a lemon with nothing else, it was tastefully written. While i read, it didnt sound trashy whatsoever. I normally read fics with even a little bit of a plot so i when i began reading i wasnt expecting to like it. I think what atrracted me to it was the fact that we dont know who the couple is. So i continued reading in an attempt to find out. The anoniminity about is very creative, i havnt read a fic like that. There werent any distracting gramatical or spelling errors eithers. Your writting has a great amount of discriptiveness, readers are able to visualize better thanks to that. All in all, it is an excelent fic.
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Title: Whas it... Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 09:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Kagura and Naraku?
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Title: The lovers Reviewed By: SakuraFox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 09:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow...I've never read a story that was a full lemon. The detail was absalutly amazing. 10/10. I'm going to guess that the pair ins Naraku/Kaugura. ~Sakurafox
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