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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 17:11 CST
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aha! finally figured out what's going on... and now if you would be so kind as to let me know who got in an accident and finish the story...and then start another one (and then another)... i'd be happy :S
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Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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whats the deal?? Ahhh!!! you driving me nuts here!!! plz more!!!! and longer chapters too!!!;)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 11:17 CST
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Gah! Sometimes I wonder why I like these guys so much, when I spend so much time wanting to knock their heads together--but I guess that's part of their charm. *sigh*
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Reviewed By: mockorange7 On: December 25, 2005 22:41 CST
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Hi, My only criticism is--the chapters are too short! Or you are not writing fast enough! Or something! I'm really enjoying this fic--you've got enough tension and interest that I can't wait for the next part, and I like the fluffy hints lots. Really looking forward to the rest.
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Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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uv got me hooked now!! please more? i wanna know what yohji's gift is!!!!!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 18:30 CST
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I don't mind short chapters. I write a fair few of them myself. ~grin~ Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: December 20, 2005 15:05 CST
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okay you are getting meaner and meaner with these short chapters! that being said i liked the input you get into everyone's minds....hehe i'm so glad you are writing more though (i'm benefitting)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 09:35 CST
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*sigh* You can always count on Aya to put a relationship problem in the worst possible light... well-written! and writing every night? Watch out, that's very dangerous. You might end up like me. *grin*
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 05:00 CST
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"Yoji the playboy extraordinaire was tired of having to work for his meal." Such a good line. I'm still smiling! Looking forward to reading more!!!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 21:23 CST
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And they call me the evil one! Seems like you're gunning for my title! I'm completely captivated, slightly confused, and eagerly anticipating more, more, more!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan too lazy to sign in On: December 17, 2005 00:38 CST
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okay i am also too lazy to write two separate reviews...so may i say the cliffhanger in the first chapter is evil and the lack of info in the second is also evil *glare* hmph *glomp* thanks for writing btw!!!!!
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Reviewed By: red queen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 00:14 CST
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sheesh, mediaminer never lets me stay logged in lately. but anyway. let me guess, yohji's moseying down the street and suddenly a turbine engine falls off an airplane and squishes him -- but not fatally! -- a la Donnie Darko. right? right? no? hm...i know! he was attacked by a voracious herd of were-lemurs! ...no? ok, i give up. sorry, i'm supposed to be reviewing, and i'm just writing a bunch of nonsense. i liked it, it feels kind of surreal there at the end. i'm a big fan of the surreal. it's just a big teaser though! grrrr! write s'more ya big tease!! btw, read the sous-chef yet? :D love, RQ
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Reviewed By: KD not signed in On: December 15, 2005 19:46 CST
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Agh!! You can't just leave it there! *growls* Write more soon, or I got a fish with your name on it.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 10:50 CST
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Nice. Now write more so I can see why Yohji is lying in the snow possibly bleeding.
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 09, 2005 05:37 CST
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now that's just evil. short and evil. write some more, dang it. hmm...do you use the word 'hay' instead of 'hey' intentionally? it's a little disconcerting, like suddenly everyone's in a stable and i don't know how they got there...and write some more of this, i like it. love, redqueen
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