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Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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uv got me hooked now!! please more? i wanna know what yohji's gift is!!!!!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 18:30 CST
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I don't mind short chapters. I write a fair few of them myself. ~grin~ Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: December 20, 2005 15:05 CST
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okay you are getting meaner and meaner with these short chapters! that being said i liked the input you get into everyone's minds....hehe i'm so glad you are writing more though (i'm benefitting)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 09:35 CST
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*sigh* You can always count on Aya to put a relationship problem in the worst possible light... well-written! and writing every night? Watch out, that's very dangerous. You might end up like me. *grin*
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 05:00 CST
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"Yoji the playboy extraordinaire was tired of having to work for his meal." Such a good line. I'm still smiling! Looking forward to reading more!!!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 21:23 CST
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And they call me the evil one! Seems like you're gunning for my title! I'm completely captivated, slightly confused, and eagerly anticipating more, more, more!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan too lazy to sign in On: December 17, 2005 00:38 CST
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okay i am also too lazy to write two separate reviews...so may i say the cliffhanger in the first chapter is evil and the lack of info in the second is also evil *glare* hmph *glomp* thanks for writing btw!!!!!
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Reviewed By: red queen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 00:14 CST
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sheesh, mediaminer never lets me stay logged in lately. but anyway. let me guess, yohji's moseying down the street and suddenly a turbine engine falls off an airplane and squishes him -- but not fatally! -- a la Donnie Darko. right? right? no? hm...i know! he was attacked by a voracious herd of were-lemurs! ...no? ok, i give up. sorry, i'm supposed to be reviewing, and i'm just writing a bunch of nonsense. i liked it, it feels kind of surreal there at the end. i'm a big fan of the surreal. it's just a big teaser though! grrrr! write s'more ya big tease!! btw, read the sous-chef yet? :D love, RQ
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Reviewed By: KD not signed in On: December 15, 2005 19:46 CST
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Agh!! You can't just leave it there! *growls* Write more soon, or I got a fish with your name on it.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 10:50 CST
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Nice. Now write more so I can see why Yohji is lying in the snow possibly bleeding.
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 09, 2005 05:37 CST
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now that's just evil. short and evil. write some more, dang it. hmm...do you use the word 'hay' instead of 'hey' intentionally? it's a little disconcerting, like suddenly everyone's in a stable and i don't know how they got there...and write some more of this, i like it. love, redqueen
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Reviewed By: Heta Noitio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 09:24 CST
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A little violent start (Aya's agressive), but seems good altogether. ^^ I'll keep an eye on this fic. I hope... Oh darn, it wasn't Yoji, was it? Please? Pretty please? Yotan gets hurt --> me no likey.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 22:26 CST
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Ah, we do so love our boys in pain of (usually) their own doing.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 19:03 CST
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poor yohji. he really can't seem to help being an idiot. so glad you're writing again! looking forward to the sap part after the angst. ::puppy eyes::
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 09:04 CST
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What an unbelievably cruel place to stop! Well-written and a great hook, but...but it's so short! This, of course, is me begging for more and hopefully some kind of reasonably happy ending after a little more bishie torture, naturally.
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