"Broken Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: inuluver4everhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 19:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh wow what a great story! how come there hasnt been any updates since in like 2006 if i remember right? i really hope you havent given up on it because you have something good there. if ya want to you can email me at what my user name is.... just stick the @ befor the hotmail and the . for dot com
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Reviewed By: dog demoness On: December 25, 2006 14:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Twitch twitch* OH.MY.GOD. This story was *twitch* really good. As for chapter 3, I turned about ten shades of red while trying to ignore the weird stares Hikaru kept giving me. My aunt Aiko dosent know english and I thank Kami for that otherwise I would have been embarassed into the darkest pit of hell. Anyways good story I may be allowed to read this at 16 but that was.... lets just say that you could have fried an egg with the heat and redness radiating off my face.
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Title: 0_0 Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru's girl On: December 25, 2006 13:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: 0_0 she made love to Sesshoumaru?!?!?!?!?!?!? For the love of kami what the hell?!?!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 25, 2006 12:53 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love your stories please update soon!
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Title: SQEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! Reviewed By: Lady of the West On: December 25, 2006 12:51 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You rock awesome story i love it! please update soon we are all dying to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Taiyoukai Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 23:21 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update soon! I love your stories and I find that keep on comming back to this one wating to see what exactly will happen next. I know that you have the power and passion to wow us all, so please update soon! ~Taiyoukai Lady
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Title: Chapter 3 Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 14:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Interesting story. Update again soon. Can't wait to read what goes on between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru and how they help Kagome.
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Reviewed By: kougalover123 (nsi) On: January 22, 2006 14:01 CST Comment/Review: a nice long chapter. well seems to be getting very good can't wait for more. please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 11:49 CST Comment/Review: i can't wait to find out what happened while she was away. please update again soon. i may be the only reviewer at the moment but i really like this so keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 12:16 CST Comment/Review: this is good so far please update again soon. i can't wait to find out what happened to Kagome.
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