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| "Away" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: need more chaptrs!
Reviewed By: pheonixanime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
need..... more.... chapters, must...findout....what happens.
| Reviewed By: rabidfang08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nnooo! That's what I thought when it left off... I don't what it is about your fic, but I'm addicted now... which is good because I'm really picky about the fics I read, I usually can't read serious ones like this... the characters were OOC but then I guess they could become that way as they grew older, and you did a good job of changing them... I like that you made Tohru less of an airhead, as Lisha Lane said, and that you showed another side of Akito. Anyway, I hope you write more soon and I will put this on my favorites list. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Lisha Lane On: December 20, 2005 13:31 CST
Comment/Review:
You made it seem as if Kyo found Tohru the same day that he left. If so, then how did Akito find out and manage to send a letter to Tohru within that same time period? The postal service usually takes a few days. Also, I think Tohru was very out of character with her yelling cusses. Akito too, with his softness, but time can do things to a person, so I'll forgive you for that. Still, I love this plot and hope you put out another chapter soon.
| Reviewed By: Lisha Lane On: December 09, 2005 15:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Great plot. Finally a story that doesn't feature Tohru as a stupid airhead or a slut. Thank you and please update soon. P.S. I think you did a very good job at shaping Akito.
| Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: December 08, 2005 00:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Very interesting. When I read the summary, I was hoping it would be Akito/Tohru, but when I read the two chapters, it seemed like it will be Kyo/Tohru. Please update real soon.
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