| "the Fate of a Shinobi." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Gaara429 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so HOT LOVE it, iam sure it mast be hard to do it with 4 guys but it turned out awesome LOL it!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Too...much....hotness.....bishi.....OVERLOAD!!!! Wow there was a lot of sex in that, yet still I want more. My boyfriend better come back from snowboarding soon or else I'm going to die.....that was irrelevant, sorry. Anyway, great story, I like you writing style, really subtle but at the same time your describing something that isn't in the least bit subtle, great job.
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Reviewed By: FrEaKiSh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 19:03 CST
Comment/Review:
That was her 1st lemon? Woooooow.
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Reviewed By: srstjh On: August 01, 2006 12:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seriously...Great job! : D
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Reviewed By: randomHime On: March 14, 2006 18:53 CST
Comment/Review:
that was....kinky!!
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