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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Yuugi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 19:12 CST
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Thank you for submitting your story to the FFARG. First off, I want to commend you on your plot. Your story sticks to it very well. You do have some errors regarding punctuation and typos sprinkled throughout. You also have some very common grammatical errors and a few sentence fragments. I suggest that you find a good beta-reader which can be found in the beta-reader thread on MM.org's forum. You have an adequate amount of detail, though I do believe you should expand a bit more. This story has much potential, so keep up the good work and keep up those writing skills!

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