| "The Maxwells" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: love it
Reviewed By: Nikki_T_3 On: January 03, 2006 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Please you have to update. Mr. and Mrs. Smith is one of my favourite movies. I love the role Heero and Duo are playing. Signed, One of you fans Please, if you can, e-mail me with the new chapters. Nikki_T_3@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 19:44 CST
Comment/Review:
dude that was awesomeness!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama (coulda sworn i was signed in a minute ago....) On: December 26, 2005 18:00 CST
Comment/Review:
woot!!! *kon-fu punches* chyeah! update! must know what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: drkwndz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good idea for a fic. You're following the plot of the movie a bit too closely though. That's fine for ppl who haven't seen the movie but it's close to being like reading the script with different names if you have seen it. Heero and Duo are too OOC, it makes it hard to follow which "he" is the subject of some of the sentences, Heero isn't Mrs. Smith he might react similarly but he wouldn't usually use the same words or gestures. On the other hand Lady Une as the therapist is hillarious I can so see her being like that. Overall it's a good start that could use some tweeks and I hope your plot bunny lives and flourishes.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 17:06 CST
Comment/Review:
*grins like a loon* i friggin love this fic so far. update update update!!!!!! *holds up 10+ sign*
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Reviewed By: aynia (who's too lazy to log in) On: December 09, 2005 05:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I wonder where this is heading.. - I'm looking forward to reading more! Two chapters posted in such a short time and there will be updates on your other stories, too?! *is happy* Yay! ^^
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Reviewed By: Jade1154 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alll right back in action!! i've never seen mr. & mrs. smith but i want too just like i cant wait too see more of this story! great job so far!!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 18:58 CST
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I'm guessing this was brought on by Mr. & Mrs. Smith.... I've never seen it, but I think it's pretty good... keep going okay?
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