| "Blazing Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 193 ] |
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Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 10:02 EDT
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Honestly, I'm just glad you haven't abandoned this story and I'm perfectly content to wait. ^^ It's good to knwo that we'll be able to learn about Suikotsu next chapter. He seems to have had a profound effect on Kagome's life. I really do feel bad for her, having her heart broken so many times. I know Inuyasha will do his best to take care of her heart. A nice quaint moment in the park was refreshing for now. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 10:05 EDT
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 23:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! that was so cool! don't worry about your time i'll wait as long as necesary... this story is awesome! and now i'm off to sleep since tomorrow i have school... hehe update ASAP!!!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 18:57 EDT
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^_~ Hey thurr! Nah, take your time. I know how you feel -_-. I loved the new updated chapter. Very interesting, might I add. I'm interested in knowing how you're going to go about this. Keep us all posted. ;3
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't mind the break I'm just sooooo glad you updated! I was scared that you had just stopped the stroy. ANd this is one of my favorites. Thank you for updating and please keep up the good work with this amazing story! IIKI look foward to the next update! Thanks again for continuing this story! -Vagabond
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 06:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see that you've updated. Don't really care if you're late or tardied, just want you to keep it going and not just stop right in the middle of the story, alot of authors been doing that lately... Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace.
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Title: Chapters 1-23
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 02:02 EST
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Hmm, I don't understand a few things about this fic but I still liked it. One of the major ones was with Kagome and Houjou. You made it clear they couldn't have kids the normal way but not clear as to the reason. Obviously, Houjou's swimmers work but did they ever consider a surrogate or invitro fertilization? It all seemed rushed. Not that I'm complaining that they adopted Shippou, it's just that they came to the conclusion that Kagome couldn't have kids so quickly. Does that mean she's completely barren? You'd think Kagome would want to know these things for sure instead of jumping to conclusions because of Houjou. Another thing I was confused about was Inuyasha and Kikyou. She obviously had to know he was a hanyou just by looking at him when they had first met. She further started a relationship with him then dropped him because he was hanyou. I know that she was probably trying to overcome her past or something on her own, but with her intense hate for demons, I just don't understand why she let it go so far with him. I mean, his Dad is obviously a demon, as is the entirety of his side of the family, so Kikyou would have had to interact with other demons on a daily basis, such as Sesshoumaru. With her attitude it doesn't seem like she was ever willing to change and with her past you can see why. Anyways, I liked the basic plot of your story but to me it seemed a little too rushed and short. Suggestions for improvement that I can give you would be to flesh out your chapters and add more detail. This fic was still quite interesting and unique. I hope you keep writing and I'll keep an eye out for updates. ;)
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Reviewed By: luvofanhanyouandmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 14:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh this is really good!! please updtate soon!!! love this so much...wow, not very creative review, but oh well.
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Reviewed By: bloodlily On: January 04, 2007 18:39 EST
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Um, excuse me? WHEN THE HECK ARE YOU GOING TO ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER?!?!?!? The suspense is KILLING me...
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Title: Kikyo of the seeds
Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 20:26 EST
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Planting the seed of doubt is one of the most evil things someone can do. Good thinking. Will InuYasha be showing his Demon side in a future chapter? I love when InuYasha changes. I don't know why. I would also like to know what InuYasha did while he was with Kikyo. Keep it up.
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Title: LOVE IT
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 20:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Absolutely Love This Fic!! So When Did You Decide To Make Kagura A Lez? Update Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 15:42 EST
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i liked it. the one thing i want to say is that if inu leaves kags, he really will be just another one on the list. just cosider that as you continue. Im glad you made kikyo not a heartless bitch. i never saw her that, in the series, at keast. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 13:30 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 07:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found you story today and thought is was just great I'm going to follow it I put it on my story alert list. I hope that Inuyasha doesn't listen to Kikyo and stays with Kagome. I agree with Abi that Naraku is too full of his self to see how his plans for Kagome is going to fail. I can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 05:36 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait what if the police officer was a demon that just saved her because not all are bad. I Koga was weak and was only in high school damnit! And the others were straight up humans, so same humans are evil too. Well anyways that was a great chapter and hope you update soon. Peace.
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