| "Just Watching" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Korune On: October 12, 2006 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I liked it... LOTS. ^_^* Your smuttiness is awesome! **blushes** There, I said it! But I absolutely LOVE the attitude to put to Yuki. So like him, and really hot! You made Ryuichi omfg hot too though, with still keeping to his character. Tohma... **shakes head** Man... I've seen him in fics as sadistic, but not a closet pervert! I like that turn. And who can forget Shuichi... I really like the nympho Shu. It doesn't look like you've done anything since... March? Of this year. But the pairings you have lined up are rather interresting. I hope you plan to continue. ^_^*
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Reviewed By: dbc13 On: February 23, 2006 14:13 CST
Comment/Review:
i never actually thought of that pairing... but i REALLY LUV IT!!! update update update *chants continuously* keep it up! o and, i luv that last line in the 2nd chapter!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: Phantomangel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update i love your story so much!!! I first read the chapters on AFF but then they took you off because you were under 18... but who cares i found you again and i want an update NOW!!!!! please :)
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Title: YOUR THE BEST!!!!!
Reviewed By: Mizuko Sohma [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've got me hooked. tohma is sooo dirty he just doesn't want to admit it( i like that about him in this story) i can't wait till yuki gets him in on things. you have made a great pairing/pairings.THE STORY IS AWESOME!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: teeky's bitch.... again!! On: January 04, 2006 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEE-DESU!!! loved it!! (nice one at the end, Shu-chan!!) OOH, I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!!
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Title: oh. it's good.
Reviewed By: Mizuko Sohma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's meesed up. hows tohma goona jerk off to them then snitch on them. please update IT'S GOOD!!!!!!!! p.s. tohma and ryu used to be friends with benefits? kewl!
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Reviewed By: takerus_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Allo, poppit! Just wondering if you're gunna update soon... CUZ YOU'D BETTER!!!! ^^ Heh... this story is right on my favs list!!!!!
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