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| "Living Doll" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 10:54 CST
Comment/Review:
*snickers* this was good. what threw me off was how Duo said ""Good, 'cause like I said before, I like you, Heero. I like you a lot." "... for just meeting a person and having an almost chatless drink with them, it seemed odd that he would come out with such a declaration, not knowing anything about them. But it made me think that maybe Duo knew him long before. *sighs* I'm probably thinking to much into to and how this was meant as categorized at the beginning but I can't help it! forgive me if I offend. Also, it gets little confusing when they go for the lube and they still seem like stragers to eachother, but after words we get the feel of two lovers gettin' kinky with it... yet near the end it felt odd, maybe heero thought duo wouldn't agree t more cross dressing kinkiness? All in all it was good, sorry to be so serious about it.
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incrediably hot fic. As always your fics continue to be excellent. BTW, do you take kink requests?
| Title: Hot stuff!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful descriptions! I loved the twist at the end, too. But I'm a smutty romantic.
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