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| "True" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 14:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesomely written...except one teeny tiny detail: you say he's been gone 16 years...but then you say 15 towards the end. Sry but i notice tiny things like that ^^;;; Awesome job tho! And you should post the others anyway :P
| Reviewed By: RiskDraka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really well written, I'll have to go read your other story but this one was really good, I do hope you write more stories at some point...
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