| "Enter the Witch and the Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: January 12, 2006 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good. Can't wait for Part II to come out. Will Kagome be more Defiant because Kendal is around? And one question.... Why in the HELL did KAgome's mother just take care of the baby on her own and not get married? It's obvious that Kendal doesn't want her or the baby, he acts as if marrying her was a sense of duty, something to help atone for the sin he committed. Well Later! Sorry for the ramble. Oh, and will Kagome be more bad ass in PArt II?
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Title: Makai world exists?
Reviewed By: Maili-oneechan On: January 12, 2006 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, the Makai/Demon world shouldn't even exist right now, seeing how demons STILL live among humans on Earth without any restrictions. If demons are still living on Earth full time, then the Makai world shouldn't even exist yet, and HOW does Inuyasha know about it?
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: January 06, 2006 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O DAMN!!! Talk about Drama, with the slapping between Kagome and Robin. REOW!!!! CAT FIGHT!!! LOL Anyways that was really good. Will KAgome meet up with Hiei in the future. And Oh, what about Youko? How will he react to Kagome? Will probably be pissed, I bet. It really doesn't matter when the updates come in, That's up to you, really.
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Reviewed By: Secret411 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a wonderful piece of written work and everythiing flows ver well into each other.I must say that this is a very orginal idea and for that i must give you a ten however the language was reptitve and it was alot more unrealistic then bothe shows.This is for the reason that kagomas mother is pregent loves the guy and ugnores her daughter.If you view the show inuyasha it shows that she cares for kagoma to a high degree. It would better to label some of the character very ooc or ooc.Other than that was a great story i am glad i have read it!
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: January 04, 2006 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved It!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you update again soon. Oh, and Hiei's going to be heartbroken when Kagome and Robin have to leave.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: December 27, 2005 04:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad you remambered the little jewel shard deal of Kagome seeing them. It's also original of you to add Hiei from Yu Yu Hakusho into the story. I'm beginning to think that Yu Yu Hakusho is going to be a major part in Robin and Kagome's lives. If not, oh well. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: maranjade@yahoo.com On: December 25, 2005 17:40 CST
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I love this story. It's very original and Hiei is so cute! But now that Hiei's taken to Kagome what's Shippo going to do? Is Kagome going to see Hiei in the future? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: December 25, 2005 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good. But I would like to point this out. Kagome can see the jewel shards, not just sense them. Don't believe me? Take a look at the episode where Sesshoumaru first met Naraku. In that episode, Kagome could see Miroku's shards despite they were hidden in his robes, over his heart. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: December 24, 2005 05:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting more interesting. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: December 22, 2005 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, it's getting really good. Will Robin meet up with Sesshoumaru, sometime? I wonder how the others will react to her Craft powers... And wait a sec. Wouldn't KAgome had sensed the jewel shard that Robin got from the lizard demon? Sorry for the questions, just curious. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: December 22, 2005 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That last chapter was really funny. Especially with Robin counting Sheep and Kagome's nightmare about Geometry. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: December 19, 2005 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!!! This is the first Witch Hunter Robin/Inuyasha fic I've read and I love it!!!!! Hope oyu update soon.
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Randi On: December 13, 2005 18:25 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this fic so far! Update soon!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, keep it up :)
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