"Tempt" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 21:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I love the ones that are actually legible, not to mention those that have nice, original, storylines (like this one). What bothers me is that the really good ones are most often left unfinished (like this one), while the dregs go on forever. Imagine my surprise to find you'd actually returned to us. IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME! Now then, get on with it before I crawl through the internets and rip the rest of this wonderful tale right out of you, physically!
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Title: It's a crying shame... Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 21:11 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Why do all the fics that are worth reading fall by the wayside? I really would love to see you finish this. I was impressed by the first chapter (one-shot), but you hooked me with the end of chapter 2. Please continue.
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Title: NOW! Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 18:19 CDT Comment/Review: OMG YOU NEEEEEEEEEEDDD I MEAN NEEED to update I want to know what happens next I rate this fic more than a 10. I want this updated!I mean NOW!
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Title: Whoa... Reviewed By: Hotaru-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 01:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Jeeze, why haven't you updated this thing? It's a sheer stroke of genius! I've never seen this pairing before! It's absolutely adorable! I love the mix of violence and smut that you put in here. Great job. Please update soon! This story is really really good!
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Reviewed By: hopelesslyinlove On: June 21, 2006 02:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: it really got my attention. good job. now what is it going to take for you to continue. oh and by the way....... who got killed? i have 2 know.plz
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 07:23 CDT Comment/Review: Ya know, this IS a really good story and there a lot of people who are just too lazy to write a review. Don't take it personally, the fact that people are even reading is good sign. Please keep this going!
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 07:23 CDT Comment/Review: Ya know, this IS a really good story and there a lot of people who are just too lazy to write a review. Don't take it personally, the fact that people are even reading is good sign. Please keep this going!
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Reviewed By: hentai_hoshi_miroku On: January 22, 2006 04:48 CST Comment/Review: Hey I do like this story and I would be appreciative if you continued on with it!
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