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| "Injuries of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: JJ On: May 31, 2006 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a million thumbs up for a job GREATLY done.
| Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 14:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Beutifally done, there was some nice characterization, and very little OOC. Not to mention all the sweet fluff. There was one specific sopt that confused me for the longest time. Where Miroku was talking about his meeting with Inu-Yasha, or at least reffering to it, you had one paragraph with no closing quotaion, then started a new paragraph with an opening quotation. It took me several look overs to decided wheather Miroku or Sango was talking until I finally decided to read on. I would look at this, it's quite confusing. *Has hurt his head pondering on the wierdness of punctuation* Otherwise this is very well written, and very descriptive. Great Job and thanks for submitting to FFARG.
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