"Scarvangelion" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 04:33 CDT Comment/Review: This fic is hilarious, quite funny, and very very ammusing. Thumbs up.
| Reviewed By: Marine Brother Shran [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 01:08 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: It's okay, but your idea of a cliff hanger was bad. Because honestly, you didn't build up enough tension, and that leads to...complications. Not actually complications, but it just doesn't build enough interest. That's all I'm saying. I'll keep my eye on this for now, and see what happens. Well anyways, that's all from me Cheers ^^ Ja ne
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