| "The Pup!" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 01:20 CST
Comment/Review:
i cant what untill u update pleasr do it a.s.a.p
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
The text is very difficult to read. You need to divide into paragraphs and put what people are saying into separate paragraphs and quotation marks. It will make it much easier to understand. It also moved a little fast. I had no idea what was going on most of the time. It's a good start, but some work needs to be done.
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Reviewed By: Desiree Dee On: December 14, 2005 02:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to fix your formatting, everything is too confusing to read. You need to try paragraphs and double spacing.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update.I don't know why you put two of the same chapters with diffrent titles.The ears were sticking to his head how CUTE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 21:13 CST
Comment/Review:
For some reason chapter 2 is the same as chapter
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