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Title: Medeia
Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 08:58 CST
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In my opinion you are the best Hiei characterizer (is there such a word?) on the net so I'm a little confused why he is different in this story. He seems so...soft. Otherwise a great story.
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Title: Silent Regrets
Reviewed By: Shi-no-tenshi (NLI) On: March 06, 2006 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, i love this story (as well as all your others)Hiei/kagome parings are by far my most favorite xover couple.Also, i wanted to say thank you for reviewing on my story "beautiful disaster". I know from experience the author always wants/enjoys reviews. So here's my review, and know i love this story and hope that you update ASAP, as well as your other stories.
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Title: stuff
Reviewed By: obsessive reader On: March 06, 2006 00:05 CST
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Ok, to start this off, I love all of your stories. Also, I hope that nothing said in here will be taken offensively, as I am not complaining about the topics you listed. 1: Your opening line was "Kagome stared out over the empty shrine grounds, the first snow of winter beginning to fall." I think that it could've been more in-depth if you said stright out how that made her feel. I heard the nostalgia for old times that you conveyed in the rest of the paragraph, but I still think that as well as what you have, it could be beneficial to add something else to the sentence such as "...and snowflakes of nolstalgia bore down upon her." Not exactly as horrible or corny as that just sounded, but something along those lines. As a reader, I find that it is much easier to be lead into a scene, to believe I am there, invisible next to the character, if I can feel the setting's effects on the said character. 2: It's great how you gave a history right away; it's typical, but necessary for fanfiction. But the way you did it painted a vivid picture in my mind, instead of ust saying "he did..." or "She did..." 3: I hate to say it, but I did find a few "your"s that are supposed to be "you're"s, and there were a few places that could've used a comma. I know how hard it is to get a chapter out and then spend time going back over it (and I also know how nit-picky I can get sometimes), but I expected better from an author of your caliber! When you set high standards, readers are let down when you might not match them all of the time! If you already have a beta, make them read their high school grammar books over again! There's no way I could continue, as I've only read the first chapter so far, and I'm waayyy too lazy to go on like this for every chapter, no matter how much I may like it. I'm a reader, not a writer (although I do dabble in the latter, just not fanfiction), and as a reader, I have a duty to get back and finish reading what I've started!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 05, 2006 22:32 CST
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It would be very interesting if they don't make it in time. Wonder if Kurama asked Koenma if he could do anything to stop or stale Kagome. Please update real soon. This is really great. Thanks for making my weekend wonderful with your fanfics.
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Reviewed By: dark crystal On: March 05, 2006 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Its so sad and depressing and I feel like crying! God I hope you don't stop writing. Please continue to write! I so want to know what happens next. And I love the pairing, Hiei and kagome is my favorite!
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Reviewed By: xxSilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 05, 2006 15:00 CST
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AAAAAHHHHH! not a cliffie! dang it, please dont leave us hanging for too long =/ be merciful.
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my kami. That was so sad! I acctually started to cry! I hope you hurry up, and update, cause I am in luv w/ this story!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 13:02 CST
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eh... well.. thats just not right... Surely someone can stop her. Or make her go back.. *pout* she just cant leave like that... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: March 04, 2006 23:04 CST
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FINALLY! He... kind of... gets it. Well with a lil push in the right direction Kagome will too. LOVE IT ^-^ UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: xxSilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 04, 2006 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another wonderful chappie. im glad your muse is comming back. ive really missed reading your stories ^.^
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Title: ^O^
Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(notloggedin) On: March 04, 2006 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Please, please, please update when you can. I love this story so much so far....wrenching my heart all over the place, nearly crying!!! *Grabs a Kleenex* My heart is breaking so much right now....I have to know what is gonna happen next. Please, keep up the great story!!
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_karama_4ever31(not loggin) On: March 03, 2006 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another good story. I love Hiei and Kagome Pairings above any others, and you jst can't find many good ones. I feel bad for Kagome, I hope that Hiei can help her get over it. Can't wait for the next chapter to see if any feelings are revealed. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 21:55 CST
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Doesnt Hiei know that sometimes it's what you DONT say that hurt people the most. He better get his ass in gear before she leaves for good... Cant wait to read the next chapter ^-^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: xxSilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 03, 2006 21:04 CST
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pleh, dont send kags off to the feudal era =( poor hiei...i like his excuse to climb into bed with her, hehe, sneaky little guy. coming from you its just what i expect, the best.
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Title: Silent Regrets
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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