Title: FFARG Review Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 15:22 CST Comment/Review: This was really well written. No spelling or grammar mistakes that I could see, no typos. The paragraph spacing might be a little confusing at times but I didn't notice. Possibly, you could've gone over a bit more of how Naraku acted back when he was a theif, but that's all I can say to criticize this piece... Ah well, too bad I can't really help you out, but it was really well written and so very tightly done. Thanks for submitting to FFARG.
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