| "Tarot" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: good
Reviewed By: lyn On: April 30, 2006 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more sooon real soon write more
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Title: Tarot
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 02:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Tarot
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: hobie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
You need to use an editor. Your sentences are all jumbled together which makes it hard to read.
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Reviewed By: Ookami17 On: February 03, 2006 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story so far, definately engrossing. i like that each chapter brings at least some twist that pushes the story forward a bit more. you have pretty good developement between amon and robin, yet i think it would be beneficial to the story to include some dialogue in the later chapters, when amon gets things explained to him and such because it may make things clearer to the reader. i've noticed a few spelling and grammer errors but nothing of great notice, you just might want to double check your chapters. it's mostly just things that spellcheck wont pick up like using the wrong homophone (example: tide and tied). anyway, i hope that you update soon and continue with this story because it's definatly worth a read.
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Reviewed By: Nikki N On: January 27, 2006 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter
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Title: Tarot
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Nikki N On: January 05, 2006 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still like this fic Its completed? ur gonna leave me hangin' i want more please add an installment
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Reviewed By: Nikki N On: January 05, 2006 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool fic gonna read the next chappie
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Reviewed By: Serafin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story, please update soon
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Title: Tarot
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Tarot
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 19:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters please? Can the pairing be Amon and Robin please?
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