| "some one to trust" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagsinred~not loggin~ On: June 23, 2006 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love the story so can you please update
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story i hope you update soon =D
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Title: your storyies are awsome
Reviewed By: inuyasha_man not loged in On: May 18, 2006 04:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
in the last 6 hours i have looked at and read every story you have wirten.(i dont regreat it at all). this last chapter was so far the best out of them all and i mean littrally. mainly i like the song but still it was good. also im am very lucky to of understood you in the last 6 hours. you have made lots of spelling eros and grammer mistakes. i think you should pay more attentoin what button your pressing, but oh well your only human(not like me jk). i hope you make more stories like this and continu(hope i spelled that right) to write more lovely chapters like the ones you have been doing so far.
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover1221(logged out) On: May 17, 2006 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is a great 1! But tf they made up the song isn't it supposed 2 be urs,ya know 1 u made up? Whatever it was sweet anyway. I really like this fic please continue.
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Reviewed By: Lonley~Soul On: May 16, 2006 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww that was so cute great chapter update soon
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat fic wuz awesome! I love dit! pwease hurry n update a soon as humanly possible!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: RACHEL MARSHALL On: May 16, 2006 14:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this shit is fuckin' long CAN'T RATE HAVEN' FINISHED
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Reviewed By: justxkawaii On: March 26, 2006 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice stories. overall, the story is really sweet. just try to avoid grammar mistakes. takes a while to understand what your typing. >< but, everything else is awesome. update soon!!! (:
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Title: I still do
Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 11:56 EST
Comment/Review:
I still really like this story. plz continue.
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Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 01:20 EST
Comment/Review:
PLZ update soon. PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ. I want to know the rest. Hurry PLZ.
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Title: review
Reviewed By: kittykatkiller666 On: February 01, 2006 16:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THOUGHT YOU DID GREAT I WANTED TO READ MORE AND MORE OF IT BUT IT OLNY WENT UP TO CHAPTER 8 I HOPE THERE IS MORE I CAN NOT WAIT TO READ THE REST OF THE STORY.
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Title: the new chapter
Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 23:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMMFG. That was a really great chapter. I can't wait to see whats comeing next. Your story is so good that I have you on my Sbc bookmarks. And tha's a really good thing because I only have a few. PLZ update soon and continue writing more.
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Title: o my kami that was great
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great cause it made me cry and i cant wait tell u update so please update a.s.a.p
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Title: Writting
Reviewed By: KittieCat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 00:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not here to be mean just construtive. You need to capitilize and check your spelling. You have to much spacing between lines. ore detail would be a good idea but you don't have to. You might want to get a beta reader. If you need one I'm willing to help, let me know SMSKitten@excite.com Think about where you want the story to go ahead of time so you can plan it out. Grammar is a biggie, make sure you're using proper tenses and point of views. You needed to get more desricptive and more detailed in things happening within the story. Like when the mother died you could have explained how she died, where she was ect. Follow a basic guide line of Who, What,Where,When,Why, and How it helps you cover all bases. Other than that it's a good story and a cool plot line.
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Title: Please keep writing
Reviewed By: Jozz On: January 15, 2006 04:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so much but you lack in spelling.Anyway Please keep writing I beg you I want to see what happens.I bet its somthing with Kikyo.Just keep writing I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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