| "some one to trust" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great cause it made me cry and i cant wait tell u update so please update a.s.a.p
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Title: some one to trust
Reviewed By: crazy144 On: December 23, 2005 14:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this song update plz i would like to read more
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Reviewed By: dj1 On: December 23, 2005 09:06 EST
Comment/Review:
cute...sad,but cute. Anyway such strong feelings for eight year olds. Cool.Until next chapter
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Reviewed By: dj1 On: December 22, 2005 19:28 EST
Comment/Review:
cool...too bad they must be parted, but at least they will see each other again, right? Anyway I like where the story is going. Keep up the great woork
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Reviewed By: Angel~of~Light On: December 21, 2005 02:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooo cute please update really soon
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Reviewed By: dark hanyou 2 On: December 19, 2005 18:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a so asd story, please write more, but put nore pages in and longer chaps, thanks,,,,,,,,,please
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Title: it is so sad and sad but good
Reviewed By: dark habyiu On: December 19, 2005 04:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so sad adn but so great, please write more . please, coulpe more, like 5 chaps, if possilble, please pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseple asepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease |
Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 19:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay tax fore reading my fic i like revows any way tax for the tip i'll rite more but frist i have to think of somthing lol up date soon thaxs
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 22:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay love your work can u R&R my fic its coled INYASHA HAS A BRITHDAY.up date soon tax.
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Reviewed By: dark hanyou magic On: December 15, 2005 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaze writ chap one ,, ssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lilcar12( aint logged on mm) On: December 14, 2005 23:38 EST
Comment/Review:
i like the story but it would help it would help us readers if you use " for talking and ' for the thoughts!! =D plz update soon
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Title: My Review
Reviewed By: kyrcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 21:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just looooove your work and i hope too see more soon!
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Title: kyrcat
Reviewed By: kyrcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 20:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just looooove your work and i hope you write more!!!
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