"betrayel" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Reviewed By: Normal_Girl41 On: January 20, 2007 00:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is so cool and awsome.PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: betryal Reviewed By: Nessa Lynn On: December 05, 2006 15:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this is a great story.Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: tifa-luvers-cloud On: August 26, 2006 00:02 CDT Comment/Review: im liking this fanfic!so plz update soon.... and i hope this is a sasuke/kagome story!
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Title: good Reviewed By: Lang/wolf On: July 24, 2006 11:56 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I think it was a good first start and a good i dea to keep her late friends weapons and you left some very good clues as what happened to sango and miroku
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 19:11 CDT Comment/Review: ***SCREAMS*** I HATE HATE HATE HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!! SO PLEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 2HOT4U On: June 05, 2006 15:13 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: i like it keep writing! update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Hieiluver05 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 21:01 CST Comment/Review: I like Naruto/Inuyasha crossover stories especailly is if it's about Kagome. I'm hoping that the pairings for this story is Sasuke and Kagome
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Reviewed By: lilcar12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 22:49 CST Comment/Review: HEHE!~! me againz!~!! i just wanted to tell you that if there aint any permanent pairings i want kags to go with itachi!~!! yahoo!! update soon 'cuz i've been waiting for like...14 dayz. lol ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: December 19, 2005 12:55 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is getting really good. You should update this soon. And I hope you do. I'm also hoping that this is a Kakashi/Kagome pairing. Or at least a Kagome/Sasuke pairing. I doen't matter to me, as long it's not with Gaara, Gai-sensei, anybody else who's weird looking or acts funny.
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 12:10 CST Comment/Review: woohoo!another Naruto/IY crossover. These are the best!I hope that someone,preferably Sasuke or Kakashi or Itachi,fall in love with her. Pleez update soon.
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Title: ^^ Reviewed By: animewolfgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 20:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is really good so far. update soon
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Reviewed By: Talakurama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 09:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow! it is awesome. Please update it soon. I really enjoy it a lot. Please finish your story, most of the stories that I've read aren't finished, I don't know why, but maybe they had writers block. Well please finish it. So far I'm really enjoying it. It is very good, and it is wonderful. Well Bye. Talakurama
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Reviewed By: Ms. anonymous On: December 15, 2005 15:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Could you please explain, at least in the author's note, how she went from being the schoolgirl we all know to having Sango's and Miroku's weapons?
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Reviewed By: Animeotakubara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 06:16 CST Comment/Review: Please update soon
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Reviewed By: lilcar12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 22:52 CST Comment/Review: i like naruto/inuyasha x-over they r cool!! i like ur story so far and i hope u update soon!~! ^-^
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