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| "My Daughter, My World" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: yodaihiro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hate Kiyoshi, but because you didn't kill him off and you had him say that they wouldn't see the last of him...makes me believe there's eventually going to be another sequel. I do hope so because this was reeeeeeeeeallllllly awesome! And how you portray Koenma in this really makes me dislike him...alot...as well as all the barring rules imposed on Jin and his family...can't go see Yusuke and whatnot. Stupid rules. But Akina is a cutie...and Touya's my favorite portrayed real character in this fic. But anywho you've done a really great job, Oreana. And I wouldn't have expected any less than the best from you. ^_~ I'll be watching your stuff!
| Reviewed By: yodaihiro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alrighy Yo here with a review for chapters 2 through 4! Aye two has to be the sweetest scene I've ever read...it was so tender. And seeing Jin like that with a baby was so warming to my heart. I can definitely tell he loves Akina very much. I also loved how you had Akina and Aeka bonding with one another in chapter three. It was an awwwwwwwwwwww sort of chapter. I also like how you've portrayedd Touya as a fatherly tpye for Akina...I've always tried to picture him with little ones. He's so good with her, and to tell you the truth, Touya being all fatherly and protective makes him sooooooooooo much cuter. -swoons- But anywho I can only wonder what has Touya worried...so I'm gonna go read the rest of this crazy awesomely awesome story. Expect another review in about three or so chapters!
| Reviewed By: yodaihiro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I decided to go on and review the first chapter and let you know I will be doing the same thing I did for What Words Cannot Say by reviewing only every few chapters. Anywho, I loved how you started this ficcie. AND Aeka can hear!!! I was grinning from ear to ear when I read that. I could feel how happy Aeka was. You always make Touya appear just right and cute at the same time. And Jin...oh the childish wind master. You've gotta be nuts if you don't like that sweetie. Everybody loves Jin. But anywho, characterizations are great as usual. And Aeka still has to got be my favorite OC ever. -smiles- Well, Suzuka didn't come off as clown scary, so I'm mighty thankful for that...and I've never like Shishiwakamaru...but you'd portrayed him well! Excellent job, Oreana! I look forward to reading the rest of this. ^_~
| Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 11:43 CST
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oohhh!!! i loved this story but Question is ther going to be a sequal with the daugter? you know when she is older? i was just wandering
| Reviewed By: TimeErase [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story, I absolutely loved it. You must be the only author I've seen who's used Jin as one of the main characters before. I loved how the plot was, so calming in the middle, then it twisted near the end. Plot devices! That character, Kiyoshi, he was made well. At first, I thought he was a foolish man, but he turned out to be smert! I'm actually reading the previous story before this. Both stories are excellent!
| Reviewed By: TimeErase [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truely loved this story. When I read the first chapter, I was taken back seeing as Aeka was deaf. I widened eyes as I read the line "Do you want me to turn the hearing aid off for you?" I thought, 'Ooooh crap.' I kept reading and fell more in love with the story. Akina is adorably innocent and sweet, as well as equipt with her own set of wings that she cannot use yet! Aeka's personality is caring. All through the story, I kept wondering 'Are they going to pull a stunt that will let her recive her hearing back fully?' but she's best the way she is (: All-in-all, I loved the story. I believe you're the first author I've seen who's created a main character, who's deaf! I simply love Aeka for that, and Akina with her little wingies. Please, update soon, when you can! *flee's off to your other stories* I had to make an account, just to review this story too xD
| Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this fic please up date soon
| Reviewed By: Raistlin Windblade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the beginning of a YYH fanfic that I have read dealing with this family you have created with Aeka and Jin I have to say I am more than impressed with how it turned out. Each character has their own personality and the true YYH charas ring true to their true natures as I remember them from episodes on the tele. Your writing style is getting better and better each time I read a piece from you and I am honored to get the sneak peaks no one else does. Keep up the great work and I cannot wait to see more from you =3 -=Raist=-
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