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| "Maybe There's Hope After All....." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 13:52 CDT
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I rather like leaving reviews for each individual chapter, hope you don't mind.^.^ I really liked the line- "it was on of those things you can't control, like periods and air." *cracks up* I wish I could control air. Periods....let's not go there.^.^ The way you described Pan's outfit sounded really beautiful, and I personally don't mind her having amber eyes- it makes an interesting change. I can just picture the looks on Goten and Trunks's faces- I would pay good money to see that. ^.^ wonderful work, I loved it! keep it up, it's awesome! | Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 13:31 CDT
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*snickers* poor, foolish, self absorbed Hercule....who would have ever thought? *laughs loudly* his lies uncovered by a three year old.*big grin* I thought it was really cute how little Pan would idolize vegeta (I can really picture that, somehow.) And chichi's raving is classic. Great work, now on to chapter 3! *runs off* | Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Pan, being stalked by her parents. *shakes head* So Pan's real name is Panelope? hm...never heard that one before, I like it! I'm guessing that you came up with that on your own, right? smart cookie. ^.^ Anyways, I like the prologue, and I'm gonna go read the rest to. But I wanted to thank you for leaving a review on my fic Icecream and Escapades, it was my first one here on mediminer!(I have a few posted on FFn) so thanks alot! oh and the symbols should be gone for good(no idea how they got there.*shrugs*). Also, I'm working on three or four T/P and G/B fics and I'll probably post them soon. If you ever feel like reading them, I'd love to hear your opinion! Thanks for the review, now I'm off to the next chapter.^.^ |
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