| "Shards of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: SoutasSister [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 01:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I believe more people would read this story if the formatting was fixed. Only one person should speak in a paragraph. You have conversations all crammed into single paragraphs and it is difficult to read. Mediaminer has a help forum that might help you repost your story with better formatting. http://forum.mediaminer.org/index.php?t=msg&th=26390&start=0& Good luck.
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Reviewed By: miko_kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
please continue with the story
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