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Reviewed By: Kia_from_subafuruba On: February 23, 2006 11:12 CST
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Dammit! *ÃÆ'Æ'Æ'& Atilde;ƒÆ''Ã'Ã'§ ;* stands for someone drooling, and ÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'¢ ÃÆ'Ã'¢"&At ilde;'Ã'¢ÃÆ''Ã'Ã' Â¥ for a little heart.
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Reviewed By: Kia_from_subafuruba On: February 23, 2006 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
First chapter: hahahahaha! XD I really can see them doing that...yes Shigure, please show us *ÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'§ ;* XD. Hands-on practice now? *ÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'§ ;* Hrm, sorry. ""Tohru has enough to worry about without adding little Kyou's running around."" I love that! (and I'd love to see little Kyou's running around :3 Second and fifth chapters: nice alternative chapters, you kept them all well in character, well done ^^ Third and fourth chapters: ÃÆ'Ã'¢Ã¢"&At ilde;'¢Ã'Ã'Â¥ Ooooooo ÃÆ'Ã'¢Ã¢"&At ilde;'¢Ã'Ã'Â¥ so sweet! *happy Kyouru fan* thank you!
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Reviewed By: Kyona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 23:42 CST
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Very good. I'm glad that you're getting more information on how the storyline goes rather than what most people do and just go with what they think is the end. I think right now, knowing what I know about the storyline, you are the only author I can tolerate for Furuba fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 07:57 CST
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Poor Kyo... I hope everything turns out all right...
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Reviewed By: Kyona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 18:12 CST
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Very cute.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 04:13 CST
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Awww... That was so sweet. ^^ This is definately one of the best Furuba fics I've ever read so far... And you almost make me want to like Tohru... lol
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Reviewed By: Kyo's Tohru On: January 27, 2006 18:43 CST
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*trys to hold back laughter, with no success* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!!! Yet it does scare me that I can actually see Shigure and Ayame doing that. And I can see Hatori saying that too. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lyra Kamiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
These were great responces to the challenges. Admittedly, the "the talk" one was my favorite simply for the humor, but the rest was great too. You should consider continuing the second one... I want to see what would happen if Hana really did lock them in a closet. And the third was just nice fluff. Fluff is good. Have to say my favorite line from the whole thing was Hana's "That explains a lot." You keep everyone wonderfully IC. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 19:09 CST
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first story: BAHAHAHAHA ok this is so much funnier now that I actually know who the characters are! This made me crack up, " know you would love to have her all swelled with Kyou babies" LOL I love the ending too, with Hatori coming in and telling him not to have little kyou's running around, and then him shoving the condoms far back in his dresser...just in case, LOL. That was so funny, I love it! Ayayme and Shigure teaching sex ed...definitely a scary thing indeed! second one: I just love the way you wrote this. I love how Arisa stops Kyou and the haunted look that he has on his face, this whole story came out so perfectly. I could so see something like that happening in the manga too. One thing that I love about it is how perfectly you capture the friendship between Arisa, Torhu, and Hana. They're so loyal to her and always there to protect her and you really showed that. And I love how they tell Kyou how much Tohru needs him, and then i love how they say it's not such a bad idea to lock him in a closet, lolol. Great job!!!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:18 CST
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CLOSET! CLOSET! CLOSET! Whoop, whoop! Did I mention that I vote CLOSET!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: bubblegum2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Loved it! Really funny and in a way, really sweet. I can totally imagine Shigure and Ayame doing this to poor Yuki and Kyo LOL.
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Reviewed By: Kyo_Honda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahahaahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! got soooooooooo funny!! #1 right on charictor. #2 I expect that in any Future book. #3 I WANNA READ MORE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: December 18, 2005 12:13 CST
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I have to say, you hit their personalities dead on, really could and I could actually see that happening to poor Yuki and Kyo.. I liked it, it was pretty funny. Good stuff, keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 10:38 CST
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--BWAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA--*chokes sputters* Oh, godddddddd........
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Reviewed By: Mysterium [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 10:28 CST
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*higgles* That's fabulous! The very sad thing is that I can completely believe that Ayume & Shigure would do something like that. Poor Kyou & Yuki. But, that was so cute
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