| "A Gift of Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 06:07 CST
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these are great, several of them would be great as a first or middle chapter of a longer story (i really like the one where saki and uo find out that kyo is a cat) please write more soon
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Title: Shigure & Ayame teach
Reviewed By: meannaneko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS FRICKIN Hilarious...thanx
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: Meh1313 On: August 15, 2006 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Roflao. Lol, i swear i was pissin myself laughing
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 12:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww... Nice fluffy chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh....ohmygod....!!! *dies laughing* (a.k.a., BWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-- *coughsputterdie*)
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 04:11 CST
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OMG... that was hilarious! ^^ And all this time, we were made to believe that Yuki didn't have much of a sense of humor... Poor Kyo, lol
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Reviewed By: Cassie Parris [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 21:30 CST
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA! OMG! AHAHAHAHAHAHAAA! Your killing me! WOW! I think I bust a gut! That was ssssooooo funny! Sari, i love you! Ahahahahaaaa!
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Reviewed By: Klove0511 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 18:02 CST
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I'm glad I found this! I've read a few of these on lj, but I missed a couple. ^_^ Awesome stories!
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 04:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww... *wipes eyes* That was so sweet... And Grandpa Honda, lol, funny as always... ^^
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (NSI) On: March 01, 2006 14:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, good stuff, I haven't checked up on updates in a while for Furuba. I'm glad to see that one of the stories I was reading before got updated again ^.^ Good stuff and I hope there'll be more soon. *does puppy eyes* So I'll be looking forward to your next update, so keep up the good work, this story is coming along nicely, don't let it die! So until next time. Ja ne! Fujinakahaeero
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Reviewed By: Kia_from_subafuruba On: February 23, 2006 11:12 CST
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Dammit! *ÃÆ'Æ'Æ'& Atilde;ƒÆ''Ã'Ã'§ ;* stands for someone drooling, and ÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'¢ ÃÆ'Ã'¢"&At ilde;'Ã'¢ÃÆ''Ã'Ã' Â¥ for a little heart.
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Reviewed By: Kia_from_subafuruba On: February 23, 2006 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
First chapter: hahahahaha! XD I really can see them doing that...yes Shigure, please show us *ÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'§ ;* XD. Hands-on practice now? *ÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'§ ;* Hrm, sorry. ""Tohru has enough to worry about without adding little Kyou's running around."" I love that! (and I'd love to see little Kyou's running around :3 Second and fifth chapters: nice alternative chapters, you kept them all well in character, well done ^^ Third and fourth chapters: ÃÆ'Ã'¢Ã¢"&At ilde;'¢Ã'Ã'Â¥ Ooooooo ÃÆ'Ã'¢Ã¢"&At ilde;'¢Ã'Ã'Â¥ so sweet! *happy Kyouru fan* thank you!
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Reviewed By: Kyona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 23:42 CST
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Very good. I'm glad that you're getting more information on how the storyline goes rather than what most people do and just go with what they think is the end. I think right now, knowing what I know about the storyline, you are the only author I can tolerate for Furuba fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 07:57 CST
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Poor Kyo... I hope everything turns out all right...
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Reviewed By: Kyona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 18:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Very cute.
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